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THE SON FALLS FROM SKY

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THE SON FALLS FROM SKY

Deception lingers.
The Lord counts on his fingers.
One two three four five. 

Our sins pile up high.
Brim stones unleashes from sky.
The bible explains why .

Humans mystified. 
Humans contemplate their sins. 
Down crumbling mountains. 

Blood sheds blood sheds wild.
Genesis revelations.
brute termination.

Annihilation.
End of all generations .
lo lo damnation.

Tornadoes destroys.
A vast grim darkness deployed.
One two three the end.

The son falls on earth.
Lo the earth burns the earth ends.
One two three the end.



Definition of lo:look! see! 

Sponsor:Gail Doyle
Contest:The End Of The World Armageddon

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  1. Date: 6/12/2012 5:01:00 AM
    aw nice work, and thanks for your kind comments on my worship footle God bless from diane

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:15:00 PM
    Elliot, Sooo well done--you are in the hunt with this one!

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 3:20:00 PM
    well done friend like it

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 11:47:00 AM
    eerielicious, elliott!... point well crafted, and how!.. i'm still blank on this theme..winning huggs...:)

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 11:40:00 PM
    ...I'll Be Drinking Some Ice Tea, Watching The Fireworks Once Again, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Friend * Although, Tis Been Nearly Thirty Years Since I Beheld The Last Show *.* Thanks For The Lovely Visit; Sooo Lovely ... Luv, Tristen :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:45:00 PM
    Elliot, I am glad I saw this one tonight. This particular contest had completely left my mind! Guess I should try to think of one too. I think you did yours very creatively with the one, two three lines added in!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:14:00 PM
    I like your powerful string of haikus on the end of the world, Jesus will bring us home Elliott, you just wait and see, luv vie

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 4:01:00 PM
    "Our sins pile up high" - I take this literally and metaphorically picturing body on top of body. OOOOH "Genesis Revelations" : Alpha Omega!!!! Brilliant, Elliott! You couldn't have used deployed any more perfectly than you did. Just as soldiers are deployed in attempts to END something so was "a vast grim darkness" smh each time I read it, it seems more clever. GOOD JOB <3