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In White She Sleeps

White
In innocence
Pale silken skin
Upon the pillowcase
Through
White
Shutters
Halo of moonlight
White
Incandescent
In dreams
White pegasus
Lifts her up
In iridescent
Sleep speeds
White
Within
Luminous clouds
White thunder
Cracks through
The black of night
Yet without stir,
White gold
Her fingertips,
White canvas the
Soul
Unawake she
Paints diamond dust
Within
White
Dazzles me
Within
White purity
White star
White windowpane
Darker me,
In 
White worry
Be
She is
White innocence,
Wrought within me

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( was for a color contest,not within this site,one person started,then another ect)

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:25:00 AM

    Thank you, To Nathan. Thank you also, Amazing writers,for your lovely comments.Reading your words is like lifting the lid of a jar.Thousands of butterflies drift,and sift out.The colours you swirl,Within comments twirl.You touch like life.Thank you,and God Bless you.Best wishes,now,and always,Tracy.xo

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 10:28:00 PM

    cool poem, Love all that white!!! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Nice win! I loved the poem.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:12:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win...Sara

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:53:00 PM

    Congratulations Great poem!! :D

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:20:00 PM

    Tracy, it is very nice seeing your name on the top of Nathan's contest list.. I happen to know he's a very picky person/poet. You are amazing... congratulations :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 7:14:00 PM

    Soup mail! :)

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:33:00 PM

    Write some more... please!

     Avatar Date: 6/14/2012 9:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Keith, Truly,you are like sunshine!.I am so touched,that such an accomplished writer as you,would like any of my poems,let alone ask to see more of them.I did post some more,hoping that you might like one or two.Dear Keith,Thank you for your shining light,you have made my day.Best wishes,Keith,Tracy.
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 5:12:00 PM

    I love your short phrase/single word construction. Marvelous imagery, too. Well done, Tracy. Best wishes, Keith (PS Welcome to the Soup!)

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 6/14/2012 5:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Keith, Thank you so much for all of the lovely compliments which you have left in reply to my poems.Thank you for welcoming me to this site as well.I am really touched,you have made my day.Wishing you all of the best,Tracy.
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Very nicely and good written Tracy. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 6/14/2012 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Anne Lise, Thank you for brightening my day!I appreciate your thoughful comments.Best wishes,Tracy.
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 9:08:00 AM

    Truly a picture and symbol of innocence :)

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 6/9/2012 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Anoucheka, Thank you so much for your kind comments,you are a lovely writer,and I appreciate the time you spent reading my poem.Best wishes,Tracy.