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Spinning Round In Passage

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Spinning Round In Passage

Spying on occupants of interplanetary Earth,
All hands aboard, their watching us now,
And have been since the planets very disrupting birth.

Moving closely now and hide being their sun,
Catching how we hold away their gun,
And study how it circles around every thing,
About it and how it works.
 
Wide open now we're nearly done,
I just want to show them the quirks,
Stuff we have done and how we've been having fun,
Scooting round our dirt, Finding out the sum,
So we can see past our sun I want to show them the perks.

Like how we hold them closer now but can see clearly past,
where they have traveled and really how hard they have worked. 
We see clearly now and no one understands how but now we see how Their system lurks and their almost past us now, thats really fast,
How they travel I can't believe we've intertwined and I am grieving down, 
Because I don't know how but we've watched them now,
And they go on by, I guess our planet Earth succeeds us now,
And it's as if God has put us formerly to work.
 
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  1. Date: 6/30/2012 3:21:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney Date: 6/30/2012 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sara, will be watching for you.
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Cyndi's "Great Soup Release" contest Ruth. Love, Carol

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney Date: 6/30/2012 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Carol
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 11:21:00 AM

    Ruth, congrats on your win..David

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney Date: 6/30/2012 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks rc
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 8:11:00 AM

    Wonderfully written poetry Ruth. Thank you for sharing. Have a super weekend. Love, Carol

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney Date: 6/30/2012 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    we had tornadoes and storms all weekend hope yours was better