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''Lisa''

I blossomed within your womb.
Remembering the touch and scent of perfume.
My shelter,warmth through loving eyes.
Sound of laughter,the tender wiping away my cries.
Telling the tales so that I could learn.
Was never a time your back had turned.
A sweet whisper of days gone by.
Oh' beloved mother,left me to stare at an ever passing sky.
  
 for the ''Lost love Contest~
6/7/2012

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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 1:45:00 PM

    This one has a aura of sadness about it..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 1:01:00 PM

    I miss my mother to - (she died 16.June.2011...one year ago ) Love this poem Kacey. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 8:26:00 PM

    It's odd to call a mother by her first name, but in this instance, it got my attention and stuck! I can picture u staring upwards and missing her right now...Many of us miss our mothers and it is great to be able to write about them in our poetry.... :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 8:27:00 AM

    A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Kacey. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol

    Greenlee Avatar Kacey Greenlee Date: 6/8/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wish you the best weekend as well Carol.So happy you dropped in to read my latest.May god grace you with love and happiness.Will be watching for you and your very moving work to come~Sincerely,Kacey