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  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:33:00 PM

    Great poem...I shall read on.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 3:49:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:28:00 PM

    Oh my gosh Lisa, this is just great! Your descriptions are desperate and so pointed in meaning and your wonderful rhyme. I put a star right in the middle of your forehead!

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 8:03:00 AM

    A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Lisa. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:55:00 PM

    Lisa, wow...wow..wow...I can't stop wow~ing the first two lines..I like the stillborn image... and the clogged image.... you are awesome,, barring justice alone... xox~pd

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:16:00 PM

    Beautifully rhymed with richly descriptive language and imagery. BRAVO Lisa! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Hi Lisa - Your words of description are very powerful. Unique wording! - Gail