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In The Garden

A gentle mist
falling
in the garden
no rain
nor storms prevail
no threatening 
bolts of lightning
no judgements here

Gentle breezes 
flow constantly
to caress 
and comfort the soul
perfection 
lies all around
fruit waiting 
to be plucked

No wants, 
no needs or desires
no pain, 
no tears or misery
eternal bliss,
all of this
in the garden.

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:43:00 PM

    brilliant imagination . i am jk .lol .nice to meet you here okie .

    Rice Avatar Michael Rice Date: 6/11/2012 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you JK
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 8:02:00 AM

    A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Michael. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol

    Rice Avatar Michael Rice Date: 6/8/2012 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am humbled at your generous comments, thank you for your encouraging review. A blessed weekend for you as well. Michael Eugene Rice (Gene)
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:56:00 PM

    Michael, i want to enter this garden... i feel the light on your side... xox~LINDA

    Rice Avatar Michael Rice Date: 6/8/2012 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The gate is always open I hope you found something useful here.
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 6:57:00 PM

    such lovely imagery you have penned!

    Rice Avatar Michael Rice Date: 6/7/2012 8:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lisa, for you kind words
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 6:24:00 PM

    sounds like a lovely place to relax. Hugs, Catie :)

    Rice Avatar Michael Rice Date: 6/7/2012 8:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Catie, i was imagining the garden of eden thank you for reading this.