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Box-Car Bandits

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Box-Car Bandits

   In the back of a big box-car train,
lived the two men named Harry and Dane.
          The car was all rusty
         The box was all musty
Cause their baths only came with the rain

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Very funny limerick! Terry

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 1:37:00 AM

    Good Job Caleb good poem the kind that makes you laugh not think.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 7:55:00 PM

    That's a hobo's lullaby. Funny short poem! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 7:20:00 AM

    Very nice Caleb!Congrats on your win!!

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 10:55:00 PM

    Caleb, you pulled-off a very strong and smelly limerick. Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest!

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 8:00:00 PM

    A stinky limerick! : ) Congratulations on your win, Caleb! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 12:33:00 PM

    This one is pretty stinky. Nice limerick.

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Great one Caleb. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Congrats, Caleb. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 7:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Limerick" contest Caleb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Caleb congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 5:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on a fine limerick xx so funny

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 5:15:00 AM

    very clever! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 4:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win! Funny... Terry

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 12:34:00 AM

    Just love that final line, Caleb. perfect meter and cute theme. congrats in my contest.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:07:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Caleb. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:25:00 AM

    Good morning, Caleb i really did enjoy your poem, have yourself a lovely day~ALWAYS *PD