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Always the Best with you

I may not be the most handsome in the world but my beauty is the reflection of your simple smile. I may not be the richest in the world, but what makes others jealous me is having you by my side and no wealth can be compared to that. I may not be the best vocalist in the world but search my Heart and you will discover that nothing is sweeter, soul-nourishing and mind refreshing than the songs it sings for you. I may not be the smartest guy in the world, but never leaving you is the smartest thing I will ever do while I breathe. I may not be the most charismatic, but the confidence I get from your warm embrace can shake Nations and stop earthquakes. I may not be as near as I suppose to be, but my body and soul will be glued to yours I may not be the best in romantic words but I am ready to shed the last drop of my blood to make sure each word counts. You are all I need in my living and existence please share that smile with me and you will never stop smiling.

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  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Beautiful poem!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 10/15/2012 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kash Poet
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Wow what a delightful powerful read of true emotions. I enjoyed your descriptive piece filled with true-blue love. A pleasure to read you.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 9/21/2012 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:46:00 AM

    The very essence of love .truly a nice poem .thank you for sharing .jk

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/18/2012 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot jaya
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 3:28:00 AM

    This sure is a very romantic write, Funom and you've highlighted what love should be about-- going beyond and just being deep :) really enjoyed this poem of yours! Smiles to you! :) and thank you for dropping by my poem with your encouraging words!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/17/2012 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks nikko....
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 12:37:00 PM

    This poem is what love is all about. You may not be all these things but what you write shows your heart is full of love--how wonderful. Lovely write. love phyl

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/16/2012 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Phyllis
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 5:59:00 AM

    Funom this is a beauty. I quite enjoyed this.. Thank you for your kind comment on mine :)

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/15/2012 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot Wilma
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 1:24:00 AM

    Romantic and goose- bumpy!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/12/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:28:00 PM

    wow I enjoyed reading this poem very much..well done ..A

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Funom, How romantic! Will I ever find true love such as you describe? Thank you for your positive comment this morning. Jean

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, you will, my dear Hean Keeney...
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Thanks for the kind words Kathleen

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 11:30:00 AM

    thank you for sharing your words!! enjoying your poetry!! happy writing!!