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Remember those days

Remember those days of less inhibition?
Those rather foolish days when we’d rather not listen
But carry on with blatant disrespect…

Sure we can reflect
Laugh and regret 
But
It’s not exactly age that brings wisdom
It’s experience

What makes you feel that you have it all figured out now?

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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 5:22:00 PM

    I love the way you talk to the reader. Scribe on poet!

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Once it all figured out, it is over...very well written. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 11:50:00 PM

    Ha,ha..This makes me feel like your writing it to me. Very nice... :o)

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 5:35:00 AM

    This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page. Once again, nice work.

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 3:33:00 AM

    Brittany, this is brilliant....well done. - love it. - Have a lovely day to you. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 9:21:00 PM

    Thoes feeling are ignorance. Not brought about by experience. You'll grow out of them.m4

    Insignificant Avatar Comfortably Insignificant Date: 6/5/2012 9:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hmmmm... I wonder what causes us to grow?
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 8:14:00 PM

    Brilliant message here Brittany...love the way you formed it to make it a strong write!!! Excellent!!!

    Insignificant Avatar Comfortably Insignificant Date: 6/5/2012 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :)
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:16:00 PM

    WOW,So true sweet heart.I love the rhyming here.Check your soup mail...

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 5:37:00 PM

    Hi Brittany; You have a good poem here. I don't think that we ever have everything all figured out. Life is a mystery. and we are always learning. We learn from expirences and also from other people. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla