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Below is the poem entitled Smile which was written by poet Blake Hannah. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Smile

Alone you walk?
Is that what you claim?
Maybe it's you who's left it this way?

I've seen pen to paper write
the deepest of thoughts
and the darkest of secrets

It's been too long since our hearts did beat
a bliss filled sense of numbness
yet we find it only in ignorance

I'll walk alone, yes all alone
but only to see you walk
hand in hand in another's embrace

So allow me to take your lonely path
and I'll smile as I give you away

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  1. Date: 6/5/2012 1:59:00 PM
    nicely written,Hanna

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Touching poem, but very well written Hannah - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 1:10:00 PM
    Wow..this is deeply said and so intense..yet heartfelt at the same time..excellent write here Blake..btw I was laughing so hard at your comment on Diane's page..couldn't stop...enjoyed..Love your work!

    Hannah Avatar Blake Hannah
    Date: 6/5/2012 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy Also, I'm happy you found my comment funny I suppose? 0.o
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 1:08:00 PM
    hi thanks for your comments on my poem, and its ok you dont have to give feed back if you dont like biblical poems i wills tillr ead your poems we are all difrent that is what makes each person unique. take care from diane

    Hannah Avatar Blake Hannah
    Date: 6/5/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You seem talented, just not exactly my cup of tea. So I wasn't sure what to say, but I felt if you were being kind enough to offer a review I should offer one as well ^^