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Rocky Mountain Visit

Rocky Mountains tower in God’s sun 
Their splendor captured in photos
Below wild stallions make a run
Putting on such fun-filled air shows

Silhouettes of birds passing by
I call to them, but remain unheard
Now I too feel free enough to fly
But looking down, by fear I’m deterred


*For Shaz Cheesman's "50 Word" contest

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  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:04:00 AM

    Thanks a lot!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:03:00 AM

    Yeaahhh!A comment from you!!I am so happy!!

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 3:07:00 PM

    You got a "Rocky Mountain High." This photo manages to fly. Love, it. daver

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Look up Carolyn...look up... never down...:) :) - Very well written, lovely. - Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Wow, you were not restricted by just 50 words! You went out and flew up and above and wrote a fabulous write with your incredible talent you bestow! I simply love your grandiose poem that you have written my friend! You will do well in the contest! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:58:00 AM

    wonderfully written with pure skill and craft. I like your words the unique sequence they use to bring out the meaning of your poem.