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Blazing Pens,Smoking Lungs

Dive into poetry,
Smoking a lot less,
Less smoke,free breathing,
Less stress on my chest,

Longer life,my health,
I know its for the best,
Although stopping is so hard,
So hard to digest,

Ink versus Smoke,
An internal test,
Who will be victorious,
In my contest......

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 3:26:00 PM
    I am sure you will win this contest. Consider entering my Questionku contest. You are a creative guy, I think you would do well.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/1/2012 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Richard think I wll
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:58:00 PM
    I'm glad..write don't smoke Light & Love

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 11/26/2012 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol,thanks Debbie
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 1:40:00 PM
    How much clearer can a message be... Words so beautiful healthy message free... Good work Richard, the FDA should hire you right away.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 11/17/2012 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol thanks Brian
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:21:00 AM
    Richard, Love the title. The message is clear.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/13/2012 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS SHERESE
  1. Date: 7/7/2012 11:07:00 PM
    Hi Richard, once again, congratulations in Brian Strand's 186th contest. Take care, it's been fun reading many winners tonight* PD

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/8/2012 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you PD,It was fun
  1. Date: 7/3/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Richard. Love, Carol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/3/2012 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Carol
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:47:00 PM
    I think you will win hands down keep writing your gems Richard and before you know it you will be a healthy breathing man, congrats luv vie

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/2/2012 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much Vie
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:36:00 PM
    CONGRATS ON THE WIN, JAG

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/2/2012 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Jag,holding up the trophy lol
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:33:00 AM
    The title drew me in and i wasn't disappointed. Been off tobacco products for five years now after using for 43.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/11/2012 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    5 years,need a little of your strength,lol,thanks Anthony,gonna beat it....
  1. Date: 6/10/2012 11:52:00 PM
    You too hey? I'm trying to do the same myself...haha.I was told to just keep trying...I'm just about there myself.I'm on my last pack right now...Already bought the smoking losenges too! I'm here for ya..

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/11/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Dan needed a friend,hope the ink wins for us both....
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 8:16:00 PM
    tough....poetry can help you overcome the smoking gun!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/10/2012 4:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am gonna give it my best shot,lol,thanks Doris
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Oh Richard, I hope that ink wins! I was a smoker all my life and finally stopped about 8 years ago! You can do it! JUST KEEP WRITING! :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/8/2012 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok taking your advice,thanks Samia
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 8:57:00 AM
    I hope the INK wins my friend :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/8/2012 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so do I,oxoxox Shaz
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:55:00 PM
    Here's hoping that your pen wins every time. Enjoyed reading your work today.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/8/2012 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hope so tooooo,thanks
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:28:00 AM
    Reminds me of the Allan Ginsberg series of poems"Don't smoke" Nice! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/8/2012 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Matthew
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 9:50:00 AM
    Richard; this is good, smoking does kill, little by little. It is said that people that smoke die 10 years earlier than what they should. Again thanks for sharing. I don't smoke. Lucilla

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/6/2012 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for the medical information,thanks for stopping by
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 3:08:00 PM
    LOL, cute! I hope the pen wins!!! Good luck...Tanya

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/5/2012 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hope so tooo lol
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:21:00 AM
    Funny how what's best for us overall sometimes doesn't shine as bright as a quick fix. Ironic, right?! <3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/5/2012 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    it is funny,you are right,lol thanks
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:08:00 AM
    An excellent piece here Richard!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/5/2012 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Ink,think you won..lol..
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 10:04:00 AM
    "LMAOF... This Was Great, Liked Reading It As I Smoke. Carma"

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/5/2012 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dont over do,they say too much of anything will harm you,ha,thanks Carma
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