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When you speak

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Below is the poem entitled When you speak which was written by poet Violet Darling. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When you speak

when you speak..
          
          
such rousing vibrations   
pour from you           
          
Tendrils of sound       
meander from your mouth           
and settle around my neck           
          
They curl           
and thicken           
and tighten 
with delicious finger-like grip           
          
Soon, I mightn't be able           
to breathe       
  
I should beg you to stop 
But I adore that you're killing me

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  1. Date: 6/6/2012 5:35:00 AM
    This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

    Darling Avatar Violet Darling
    Date: 6/6/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the lovely kind words. I look forward to reading from you!
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 12:16:00 PM
    Violet a warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your lif . Love, Carol

    Darling Avatar Violet Darling
    Date: 6/6/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a beautiful welcome. Thank you kindly :)
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:26:00 PM
    I like your poem Violet, have a great day hugs vie

    Darling Avatar Violet Darling
    Date: 6/6/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Vie. A pleasure to meet you and everyone here :)