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binibining P.iNk
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flutter
you smile... and then, and then,
I know no more
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Caleb Smith
Date: 5/16/2013 6:00:00 AM
Ok. I had to come back and see what it was that I wrote. It's not from a book or anything...just from the top of my head after I read your poem. I guess you could say it was inspired by you...and now I think I WILL add it to my book. Oh, and there is a stories of shenzhen part two. Its several poems above part one. i see you changed your name...;)
Caleb Smith
Date: 5/13/2013 12:52:00 PM
Must be quite a smile ... "he grinned with all the beauty of a thousand lovers, yet she couldn't help but think of a wolf before a meal. He would eat her alive, that was certain ... and she would let him." "If he's Moses," she mused, "just call me the Red Sea." Nice to hear from you, Nikko! I really like this little jag of yours...
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/15/2013 10:44:00 PM
Lol, look at me all teary eyes...it's ok I needed the tears... I think the thought of him gone, is hard. Well the cremation was not my choice. .. so when it happened, I felt all ugly inside. . I don't know why?
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/31/2012 1:02:00 PM
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/26/2012 2:38:00 AM
cute,,,, ;}
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/14/2012 8:08:00 PM
Still loving this one!! DANG it, Nikko. you gotta come back , at least a little bit.
Wilma Neels
Date: 6/23/2012 1:29:00 AM
you melted and everything that made sense somehow seem so confusing???? Hmmm interesting.. How'd I miss this one Missy? I love it ;) here's hoping you have a fabulous weekend.. *mwahugs*
Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/15/2012 1:15:00 AM
Wow! How this short poem can carry one to a highest peak is what poetry is all about. You have that special gift to do that Nikko and I loved this one. File it under fantastic and favorites which is where I will put it.
elizabeth wesley
Date: 6/7/2012 8:02:00 PM
Did you faint? Never felt that way, maybe I'm missing something; sure sounds special! :)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/6/2012 10:43:00 PM
Nikko WHERE ARE you???
Ruben O.
Date: 6/5/2012 9:18:00 AM
I love it! Essence of poetry concentrated! Beautiful! Ruben.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/5/2012 12:28:00 AM
wow, maybe you fainted!! What a heart flutterer he must have been, sweet Nikko!!
David Williams
Date: 6/4/2012 1:11:00 PM
Nikko, were you swept off your feet by him...David
Arild Andresen Ertsland
Date: 6/4/2012 12:51:00 PM
..this must be you smiling at me Nikko:-) few words,but there`s so much to these words!
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2012 12:26:00 PM
smile back to you nikko - / Anne-Lise
Catie Lindsey
Date: 6/4/2012 12:06:00 PM
I like this Nikko, it reminds me of those men who have smiles that literally heal. It's amazing. hugs, Catie :)
Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT
Date: 6/4/2012 11:49:00 AM
Very nicely written dear....