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CUPIDS ERROR

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Below is the poem entitled CUPIDS ERROR which was written by poet Moeka Molise. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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CUPIDS ERROR

Inline with the memories but out of phase with reality
Maybe it's because you say you're inlove with me but it's not what you're showing me
Lies from his lip a touch on the hip,
A kiss and a dip you trip,
Now I'm no longer your first pick

See it was all unfair
Cos with every stare I tried to share my emotional scar
On a darkened soul like tar, as i stand far
Like I was once your star dented by Cosmic Collisions Causing Chaos
It seems I don't know who you are

Magical Mystery.....
How a shot from a Bow to an Arrow through the Heart could cause Tragedy
Like it's trick or treat Cupid dressed for Halloween...
It's MIND GAMES...See I don't really MIND GAMES as long as they dont cause pain
So was it a MIND GAME juggling our hearts BLINDLY
Or am I just a victim of CUPIDS ERROR again?

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 1:24:00 PM
    SO ENJOYED READING YOUR MOST CREATIVE WRITE TONIGHT AND THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENT ON MY FEAR POEM .. ALSO WELCOME TO PS .. MAY U CONTINUE TO SHARE WORDS WITH LUV .. 'MORESO' MEANS EVEN MORE .. WHEN TIMES GET ROUGH SHOW MORE LOVE ..LUV ..

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 12:02:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets Moeka. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Molise Avatar Moeka Molise
    Date: 6/6/2012 3:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKN CAROL, PROMISE NOT TO DISAPPOINT
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 8:36:00 PM
    Great poem to start with! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy reading other poets work, grow as a poet and shine on this website <3

    Molise Avatar Moeka Molise
    Date: 6/6/2012 3:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU, AND I'M ALSO INLOVE WITH YOUR POETRY....YOU'RE AWESOME
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 12:56:00 PM
    "is it a mind game or cupids error" as long as you dream about it,it is suppose to be magic and mystery,love it it is so gooood,Ivy

    Molise Avatar Moeka Molise
    Date: 6/6/2012 3:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I REALLY AGREE TO THAT...BUT ITS GOOD ONLY WHEN DONE WITHOUT DOUBT
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 9:21:00 AM
    Well written, Moeka, write on, Jag