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Fishing With Grandpa

I feel it tugging
Hanging on - It must be huge!
Bluegill, smiles, grandpa

Haiku - For Sara Kendrick's "A Pleasant Childhood Memory" Contest

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:41:00 PM

    awesome imagery. I remember fishin' with my brother, my grandpa lived too far away!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:06:00 AM

    I SOMETIMES WRITE CRITICS. NICE TO MEET YOU

    Sackman Avatar Shawn Sackman Date: 12/19/2012 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nice to meet you, too! i just read and commented on your 'my beloved.." poem. it is really good. shawn
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:05:00 AM

    HELLO.I AM TEACHER NINA MINDOVA. NICE TO MEET YOU. I SOMETIMES WRITE.I AM FROM BULGARIA.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 3:21:00 PM

    I see my niece posted a comment on this poem.. I hope you did not mind me loaning here my space to read a few poems. Here's a thought from me. This is a great haiku. i love the fun and interesting image you are spending with your pa'. lovely childhood memory.. xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:05:00 AM

    I loved it too! Happy Turkey Day! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 3:39:00 AM

    A big one.....like it Shawn. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:40:00 PM

    Hi,Shawn your poem is cool hope to read another one of your poems}i{Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA;}

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 1:04:00 AM

    A fine example of a worthwhile writing form... great visuals laid by so few words... bravo...