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SCIATICA - your best friend

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SCIATICA - your best friend

    SCIATICA
You'll doubtless think my mind is fooling me,
or all my hurting's only in my head,
but pain is what brings on my misery
and makes my heart to wish that I was dead

and though my case is weak for proving it,
my lumbar's slipped a disk--and out of whack,
because of this my life has turned to shit,
and how I am, depends on how's my back.

My wish is you would have for just one day
sciatica I bear--so you could feel
in spite of what the skeptics have to say
my pain's excruciating--and is real.

   If you could stand a while here in my shoes
   the pain you'd feel would make you moan the blues.
© ron wilson aka vee bdosa
for Facebook, Well this is a pretty picture of a storm coming
on Fort Knox, with me cut and pasted onto to
photo I took last week...

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  1. Date: 6/4/2012 8:57:00 AM
    Nice poetry as usual but hope your wish of us having Sciatica does not come true. Bad enough to have a pinched nerve. We hope you feel better immediately.....

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 4:00:00 PM
    sorry to hear about your back, Ron. hope you are feeling better. hugs, Catie :)