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DREAM

Shaz Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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DREAM

Paralysed by my surroundings
Enduring the visions you hold
Deep paths burned in all corners
My brain is a multi track mind
Anxious in sleep, beating fast
Thoughts all eratic and twisted
No sense a numbness no flight
My body wrapped in your web
Struggling to escape this fight
My body overheated and sweaty
Suddenly awake - such a fright!

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:53:00 PM
    Running from someone?

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 7:59:00 AM
    well written about a scary dream

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:46:00 PM
    Hi Shaz nice write if thats the correct way to put it about something so scary, loved it may have trouble sleeping tonight lol, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 12:15:00 PM
    striking imagery, shazzzz... get it on!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 3:25:00 PM
    like it chazz ;good words

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:26:00 PM
    Wait until you get night sweats as well as night mares. Great portrait of a BAD dream.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 4:12:00 AM
    you've captured this nightmare very well here - i think we've all been there. ~ thank you so much for choosing my poem as a winner in your contest (a fun challenge!). i'm very appreciative.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 10:07:00 PM
    This sounds all to firmilure...lol. Nice! :o)

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 7/12/2012 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Opps! :o)
    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 6/8/2012 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    afraid it is probably familiar :)
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 5:14:00 AM
    This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 3:29:00 PM
    I can so relate to the paralizing aspect of your dream interpretation. To wake up and be able to move feels like coming up for air. It's usually my arm pinned under my body or wrapped up in the blanket. Dreams! hhhh:)

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:36:00 PM
    I think I have had two or three of these. Good depictions of (bad) dream, Shaz!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 8:48:00 PM
    dream or nightmare,lol,nice write Shaz,wrote a poem that I will be dedicating to you soon,thanks for opening a thought with just one word.....

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:33:00 PM
    whew! yeah those dreams make you glad to be awake.. well described Shaz and thank you much for your comment.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:09:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Shaz. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us for many years to come. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 7:36:00 AM
    Love it!!! Pure Brilliance!!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 4:14:00 AM
    WOW,STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I love the imagery here...The message is deep!!!