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Star-crumb

"HUNGRY GAMES"

"I can’t find the words I want to say! “
Under the moonbeam and sparkling scattered stardust, 
I can feel the dew, which surpasses through the night.
As I speak to you in tongue, this stale flavor becomes overdone. 
A taste of what is behind them luscious ludicrous lips.

I finally ask!
“Do you not feel what I feel?
Can you not feel my heart hesitating and holding hectically?
Addressed with attach anticipation on your side!
It is my hesitation, to answer with, “Please?”
The dwelling night disappears, underneath my deepen darken days,
In which makes every day, another night to come.
	
The wondering and whining worsens a little more.
I ache for seconds more, than my mind begins to mend.

The mornings keep approaching fast, the silences breaks!
Shattered scattered splattered words, finally released.

You start to nurture up around your notable noble nearsighted eyes.
For I have starved, just about all I can take.
Master of this crying slave… 
“Your perception burns, the prescription, of persuasive deception.”
Your inacceptable improper intention cannot heal me now!
Leaving an awkward awareness feel, which lingers to the lustiness’, lost inside of me.
With a wallow with a swallow, soaping and spiting the sight of you.
Meanwhile your thoughts focus on the painful pulsating pleasure. 
You will unleash on me…
For leaving all the crummy crumbling crumbs under our silver satin sheets.  
I will be smacking and snaking surrendering and yielding, yearning at your will.

Please Master Can I have another, Cracker in bed~~ ?

by;PD

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:26:00 PM

    what marvelous humour excellent Linda much enjoyed Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 5:14:00 AM

    Hello my dearest sis and 4ever #1 favourite and greatest poet! Stopping by again to say "Hi" and rereading some of your marvelous writes. Hope you're doing great! Sending you my warm thoughts, wishes, smiles and hugs this evening! Have you read my soupmail my dear sis? So much thanks again! love always & 4ever, Leo

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:21:00 PM

    Make sure you save time for some "me time" meaning you baby. Xoxox

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:01:00 PM

    love your subject, on this wonder, so interesting to read, and just love your alliteration...

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 1:17:00 PM

    replied to soupmail...and I'm glad to greet you for your bday!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 3:36:00 AM

    Very interesting title to go with the interesting poem you've written-- I especially liked "shattered scattered splattered words, finally released". Enjoyed this one! I see that I can post comments to you now...it may not mean much coming from me, but I had to drop by and greet you Happy, Happy Birthday, Irma! Enjoy your day, surrounded with people you love and I wish you all the best :)!

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:42:00 PM

    This is another excellent and tremendous write my dear friend! I love it! I'm reading more of your poems right now (perfect breakfast :) while listening some music in saxophone. Take care! luv yah, leonora

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:52:00 PM

    Simply Fabulous! :)

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 5:01:00 AM

    Also... your skills in alliteration just taught me more than all my English, Literature, and Poetry teachers put together. (sorry Mr. B)

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:59:00 AM

    P~D... I swear this is love! You are so inspiring, and you write so eloquently. I want to steal you away and eat raspberries and crackers in bed with you. Lol ;) I hope all is well with you!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 11:19:00 PM

    Pensive & erotic PD. - Sometimes penance can be pleasuresome - nice cadence & alliteration in the opening stanza - I'm hungry for more of your ebullience - with respect - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:17:00 PM

    This poem blew me away. Beautifully penned. I have never tried this poetry form, may need to have a try. Enjoyed reading!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 12:36:00 PM

    You had me glued to the screen, just eating it up! Love it! P.S. I loved the movie Hildago!! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 9:33:00 PM

    PD I am going off now, but you asked about the pastoral picture. It was one of Thomas Kindade's. I combined aspects of a few of his best countryside pictures to create the haiku series. Good night!

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 8:06:00 PM

    oh so good to hear from my bff PD.. am nursing a slight concussion as I fell and hit my head on iron railing running after puppy.. oh.. huge headache and Ron is singing to me.. dont know if I feel bedtter or worse luvc.. hey.. I entered your Haiku contest.. for Nate.. is it only one Haiku for him as I am reading only one entry for him for his Haiku on Skeleton Tree.. please let me know.. bff..

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 3:40:00 PM

    This one crunches against the senses. Surely a better non-romantic poem has never been penned. Good write Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 10:24:00 AM

    Whew!...Diz one make me swead a liddle, sha! Veddy nize...an you ain no siddy goil needer - C'est bon!

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 7:23:00 AM

    Cracker of a write, PD. Loved reading it, this evening. Love, Yesha

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:33:00 PM

    Just here to say a big HELLO!!

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 5:47:00 PM

    Oie yoie...I don't know if he should give you another cracker, PD. You sound very noisy, how could anyone sleep after all that racket? :) Hope you'll start back soon with your writes!! Must be something in the air, many of us are stalling. I wrote the last poem on Joe's page, confusing, huh? Was confusing for me too, was tempted to smack that cat over the head with the bow! Have a great night! love, Mikki

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:11:00 PM

    polly want a cracker huh, sure to get it sure enough, love it babe..goodstuff...

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:24:00 AM

    funny one very long delivery to the punch line though

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 10:21:00 AM

    I love your work...your are a Poet after my own heart... You are the Master' next to me... You owe me a poem together...lol Keep the write-^up...up! your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS I want to recommend this one to my friends if it is ok for you!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 10:12:00 PM

    MASTER POET IS YOUR NAME SMH.....SOUP MAIL!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 1:17:00 PM

    many thankxxx PD my bff for choosing my entry for one of your winners luv.. so grateful to be honored by u this way.. will only be entering your contests as I do not want to get into that scene again too heavily and I don't have the time... with four sons.. three grand babies and a new one due in Sept.. plus sweet honey poo and three dogs and two cats.. and Summer.. well the beach is my home till it gets cold.. luv.. so kisses and hugs.. bff

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 8:03:00 AM

    Really like the metaphor here. It made me smile but this isn't really a funny poem. I agree, it's not easy to live with someone who feels it is un-necessary to express their love once you are living together. You should "just know". I've lived with a man like that for 46yrs. He doesn't express his love but if he is dxispleased that he can express for hours on end. Good job here. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 7:32:00 PM

    Back to say hi again and a special thanks for your considering my poem...You should do this full time, gal! You seem to be enjoying yourself. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 5:08:00 PM

    Beautifully written and just so well in flow, the words slipped off my tongue as easily as butter... love (notable noble nearsighted eyes.) Fabulous ... ty karen

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:33:00 AM

    aw how lovley, i like it, I used to love tea and biscuits in ebd ona sunday morning LOL thanks for your kind comments on my takea chance poem.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:57:00 PM

    that's a lovely expressed story with a touch of humor,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

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