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Indigenous Fauna

Body shook, drum-heart pounding in my temples
until it matched the beat resounding from beneath my feet

and then the world slowed down.......for me,

a figment of perception,
but an answered prayer all the same.

If I could, I would have sucked death right out of you,
caught it in my hands,
flushed it down to where the dead things are 

below the cities - cracked sewers, clogged pipes
connected to classrooms with television-eyes.

In school I was taught that God was dead,
but when I stick my fingers into the gashes,
there remains an evident pulse.
God isn't dead, just extremely sick,
waiting patiently for a decent medical doctor
to restart the ventilator.

When my heart stops,
I pray it happens while in the forest,
far away from strangers 
celebrating store-bought holidays
all year round. When my heart stops,
I hope to have one more minute
to celebrate wot truly counts to me.

Roots and teeth will reclaim my flesh,
for there truly is no place 
                                                                      like home.








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  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:09:00 AM

    *sniff!* Keeee-roak!! keeee-roak! *sniff* sniff* ---Ffffine! I will hold back commenting on your poems now, won't even say what I think of this poem of yours....I wouldn't want to deprive people of your poetry.... waaaah!

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:06:00 AM

    *sniffffff*

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:06:00 AM

    *Sssssniffffffity*---

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 9:27:00 PM

    a very intense ending on this one, Chris. The last two parts were my favorite here. outstanding last two lines to sum up your meaning.

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 6:22:00 PM

    Holy..there`s an eerieness over this unique write my canadien brother.That part with "sucked the death right out of you..etc..sent shivers down my spine.Awesome write,Chris.Extremly creative!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Powerful poetry, Chris. Your words go straight to what matters most...

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:35:00 AM

    Hey, this is too cool! Toooo cooooool!!!!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 2:00:00 AM

    Soup Mail!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:45:00 PM

    ABSOLUTELY STUNNING POEM!!! Before my heart stops I wish to hear whispers of immaculate poems like THIS CHRIS!!!! Before my heart stops I shall hear Oh hear poems like this,before I vanish beyond a wall of hazy mystical mist. While bleeding on my knees enjoying balmy spiritual breeze drifting away with falls arid leaves, listening to fervid poems suchlike THIS CHRIS,before my heart stops and before your poem stops i SHALL be rejuvenated by your words....MY HEART SHALL NEVER STOP IF POETRY LIKE THIS LIVES ON!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:05:00 PM

    keeping granny or their loved one alive. Is kid u not, families will even wait til after the first of the month to allow a terminal ventilator wean bc they gotta get that assistance check...The other problem is that docs are afraid of being sued if they don't take aggressive measures and give the pt every opportunity to recuperate. And, with the case of cranial traumas, it could take up to a yr for cerebral swelling to diminish, masking what could be a descent return to preaccident status...complex stuff...

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:01:00 PM

    Chis, altho I am not sure what angle the authors are coming from in this book u are reading, I can tell u that the entire discussion is like a flaming Pandora;s box. I feel qualified to respond to your statements bc of my experience with working with ventilator pts. Yes, there are financial politics that come into play BUT (and it's a very big BUT), with improved technology, families are unrealistic about letting go..The other unfortunate angle I see are the families that financially benefit from....contin.

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:37:00 PM

    Intense and descipt!!...u came from the dust and if u die in the forest, you can return to the dust naturally without all of man's customs of cemeteries and caskets... oh, and if your heart stops and u are in the city, tatoo on your chest DO NOT RESUSCITATE!!! Or they will bring you back 10X!...Ugh!!

    R. Avatar Gwendolen R. Date: 5/31/2012 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What an enjoyable poem! Beginning to end was creative genius!
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 4:52:00 PM

    Chris, when my heart stops I want ot be as far away as possible from an electric supply...I like it Chris..David

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:57:00 PM

    Shhhh! Now, "my" twist at the end sounds like plagiarized from Nietzsche's "God is dead" LOL!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:38:00 PM

    I did the homework! : )

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Chris, this is the best poem I`ve read today.- Well done....bravo! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:38:00 AM

    Enjoyed the visceral impact! Its great to here poetry that grabs you by the shirt collar. Maybe we're all dead and alive at the same time! LOL

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:09:00 AM

    Soup Mail.

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:56:00 AM

    in the forest, with the sunlight playing upon the leaves and pure azure sky the canopy of day. yes, that sounds quite nice. enjoyed your poem, Chris. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:37:00 AM

    When my heart stops..I hope the god of my being would be dead.. So i can feel God's evident pulse and find love and mercy in His eyes.Very profound Chris..Still pondering...Great!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:18:00 AM

    This is hot. Congrats on the Drunken Pen!