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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Marlon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 2:51:00 AM
    Congrats on your nwin brother well done.

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:28:00 PM
    I remember this poem. Congratulations on your win in PD's Contest, Marlon! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 4:19:00 PM
    THE SCRIBE,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:23:00 AM
    Beautiful piece! I was awed by this Always, Laura

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 2:51:00 PM
    A story within a story; how well you craft it comparing to a vehicle. Loved it Marlon, you make it all so urgent.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:54:00 PM
    Excellent work, Marlon! Great imagery, my friend! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:53:00 PM
    Wow! Im stunned speachless! You are the man ,Marlon

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 7:51:00 PM
    I like this,,,,, truth in your words,,,, very much so ;} blessings of the day !

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 1:11:00 PM
    SOUP MAIL......

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 9:51:00 AM
    Beautiful Marlon, Beautiful truth, yes you are hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 3:29:00 PM
    What a deep poem, looking forwad to what is fresh and nes; ready to leave the past behind. I love it!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 4:26:00 AM
    master peice man. Yeah most def this is on of my fav poems. You kept it simple by the msg dowg, of the chain. Love!!! Gudluck for the contest. *smiles* RON

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  1. Date: 6/1/2012 10:39:00 PM
    SOUP MAIL....

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:54:00 PM
    Amazing!!! Just beautiful,I love the inspiration and rhythm. Your a poet for sure,in fact one of the best here!!! rum/soup mailll...

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:49:00 PM
    AWESOME, Marlon. I love this metaphorical "ride" with the woman at the helm. So cool how you relayed it!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:14:00 PM
    Wow this is real deep...enjoyed! Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 8:28:00 AM
    Profound write from beginning to end!! Thank you for visiting my page! Love and light.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 7:32:00 AM
    Very deep and profound verse with heart touching lines, which would leave their marks on readers mind for sure. "I nurture, console, and guide through with the help of prayer; knowing faith is the key that unlocks the door!" Great write my friend and thanks for your valuable comments on my series Poem. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra... The Scribe.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 4:14:00 AM
    thanks for your kind comments on my poem timing, your writings are also good and enjoyable to read. some of my poems are based on things in my own personal life, I do like a guy in my church for about 18 months now and in january he didnt talk to me for a while but now he is in my small group he sists next to me at church he gives me hugs and its just amzing how God rekindle that friendship even if it stays just like that it is great, but I am confident God is working in that situation, it just takes Time LOL take care God bless you from diane