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after midnight

sighing softened whimpers sparked by tribulation fingers quaver as tears are wiped stifling cries break the silence of the night as clouds move to cover the sky from lips a moan escapes bosom heaving sighing
For Nette's Sound of emotion" contest written by yasmin khan 31/05/2012/ 2a.m

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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:25:00 AM

    That was truly sad but fantastically penned. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:06:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:33:00 PM

    Very expressive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Moving piece, well done and congrats on your win...Tanya

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:34:00 PM

    yasmin , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:46:00 PM

    This is a very good Rictameter Yasmin.Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:27:00 AM

    Yas, yeah way to go, congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:22:00 AM

    I can hear and feel this emotion sweet yasmin...Charma

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:34:00 PM

    Terrific...you nailed it. BG

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Yas, I can hear the sound now,good luck..David

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 2:47:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Yasmin - Wish you luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise