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Sin Hypoxia

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Sin Hypoxia

To escape sin, I built a glass box around me.
Though sin like water started leaking through the cracks upon me.
Soon the water would consume me.
Forced hand prints scattered inside the glass by me.
Trying to break free of what I built around me.
No one is near to see or help me.
No one to call, to assist or guide me.
Tears accreting to the water wasn't helping me.
The water is slowly getting deeper around me.
The strength is fading away within me.
Please, someone save me! 
Oh God, please forgive me!
Thinking I had all the answers to build this glass box around me.
Sin, yet and still captured me.
I need you now Lord please strengthen me.
Eyes closed beneath the water crying out for him to save me.
His voice appears, "Come as you are to me.
You made a decision to consult with yourself without me.
For I am the only way the truth and the light; not you but me.
All the tools you need are provided by me.
I will bring down this glass box only for your life to be with me.
For I make no mistakes because I am me.
I will send you back to be a living witness for me and only me."


Pace, G 
INK-U-SCRIPT
05-30-2012

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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:58:00 AM

    I was trying to come up for air as I was reading this vivid account...excellent poetry.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Amen brother...Thanks for your comment on my poem "Eye Shadow." It was a true encouragement for me. :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:25:00 PM

    WOW...I HAVE GOOSEBUMPS READING THIS. YOU ARE AMAZING!!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 11:40:00 PM

    Soupmail....hey fam you gotta give me some fresh INK! I'm fiending, hook a brother up...lol

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 9:02:00 AM

    Hey, I am waiting for you to post some new poetry!! Sorry I am not getting around to many poems lately. I will have more time after tuesday! Have a good fourth of July! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 8:51:00 AM

    very faithful poem makes me wonder about all that sin you didnt name out right o well good stuff anyways take care

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:42:00 PM

    This is really great, Pace. and I see from comments below, it won in one of the contest. Big congrats. A well deserved win, I must say!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 9:01:00 AM

    Great Writing Here ! And interesting Form...had never seen it till now> You did a marvelous piece with it.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/18/2012 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Frank!!
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:02:00 PM

    congrats on a fabulous win luv.. so awesome and super title too ...

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Same to you Linda..thank you dearly!!!
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Pace. Love, Carol

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol..hugs
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 11:39:00 PM

    Congrats Pace G...enjoyed your work.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jonas..loved your poem as well!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem!!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear poet!!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:22:00 PM

    Congrats, G Pace. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:01:00 PM

    Good title - intriguing. And a great poem to follow. Congratulations.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs..thank-you!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:23:00 PM

    G PACE,, a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda always!!
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 7:28:00 AM

    The one true answer! Thanks for sharing this great peace so that others will now know how to find their way!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/7/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joi for stopping by..always!!!
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:41:00 PM

    I liked the first half, then it went about the way I guessed it would. XD Though that's again just personal taste, writting wise, it's brilliant and well composed ^^

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/7/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Blake for sharing with me!!
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 10:59:00 AM

    Ah, the first part reads like a strong prayer, and then everything is resolved by the answer at the end. Ya dun gud mahn, ya dun gud!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/6/2012 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lovely surprise to see you Chris..Very well appreciate your presence and your comment..by any means you are always welcomed! Thanks
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:26:00 AM

    wow that is lovley, it is good to ekep stepping out in faith and we can run but we can not hide from God, i think eevry one stays in the boat sometimes, but God is ok when we fall because he picks us back up, a verry wellw ritten poem, where the spirit of the Lord is there is freedom I love that song we sing at church, God bless you love diane

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/5/2012 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Diane!! A pleasure indeed to have you sharing with me today!!!
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Another fine write...No! It was an X-celent write! I read it over about 3 times..It was so pleasing to my mind to read.."A heart filled with Love,flows with Love"...Let it flow~~~

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 9:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You really don't how you made me feel Dan...thank you dearly for sharing with me!!! Thank you!!
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Thank God that He is the key to open the glass box. I think many of us, before we turn to the Lord Jesus Christ, lock our selves in our own strength. God bless you as you continue to be a testimony for Him through your writing.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's true and i agree Peggy!!! Thank you always!! Hugs
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:07:00 PM

    this is a lovely write!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lisa!!
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:33:00 PM

    To open up the windows and let the world shine in. To see you in your darkest hour, filled with so much sin. Runs the risk of ridicule and blatent disregard. I think that's why some strangers stand outside in your front yard. Spewing all their sentiment and casual disdain. Ignoring thoughts that are their own inside their little brain. Four walls that hold up each one's roof. Is how God shows his loving proof.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love the comment!! Thank you Robert!!
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 11:51:00 AM

    thanks for your kind comments on my poem a rose, in a way all ym friends are like a rose growing in my heart, all my friends even ehre on poetry soup are special too me, God bless you my friend

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm here for you if you need me Diane!! Take care!! hugs
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 7:42:00 AM

    amen. thank you Lord! In his presence, there is the fullness of everything that we need and long after. Outside of it is only chaos. Keep it up man..God is with you

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad to see you Keisha!! Thank you!!
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:41:00 AM

    thank you for your kind comments on my poem how would you feel, it is a true life story I have liked a friend in my church for around 18 months now and i told him january i liekd him and he was cool with it then he wasnt, but now he joined the same small group as me he talks to me and eevn hugs me, but i carnt say anything because i fel he will stop talking to me all over again. ohh its a funny old world take care

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Only you know your heart!!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 11:56:00 AM

    And He is the only one who can truely help you...enjoyed. Take care. Janet

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Janet always!!!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Outstanding poetry truely work of art. Nicely done poet.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sean!!
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 11:05:00 PM

    WOW,YOU ARE A SUPREME POET AND NOW I TRULY KNOW IT BECAUSE IN THIS WISE WRITE YOU SHOWED IT!!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm speechless Elliott as I'm a fan of your work..I'm really indeed honored by your words!!!
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:42:00 PM

    WOW!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/1/2012 4:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol!!! Thank you for stopping by!!
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