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Sin Hypoxia

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Sin Hypoxia

To escape sin, I built a glass box around me.
Though sin like water started leaking through the cracks upon me.
Soon the water would consume me.
Forced hand prints scattered inside the glass by me.
Trying to break free of what I built around me.
No one is near to see or help me.
No one to call, to assist or guide me.
Tears accreting to the water wasn't helping me.
The water is slowly getting deeper around me.
The strength is fading away within me.
Please, someone save me! 
Oh God, please forgive me!
Thinking I had all the answers to build this glass box around me.
Sin, yet and still captured me.
I need you now Lord please strengthen me.
Eyes closed beneath the water crying out for him to save me.
His voice appears, "Come as you are to me.
You made a decision to consult with yourself without me.
For I am the only way the truth and the light; not you but me.
All the tools you need are provided by me.
I will bring down this glass box only for your life to be with me.
For I make no mistakes because I am me.
I will send you back to be a living witness for me and only me."


Pace, G 
INK-U-SCRIPT
05-30-2012

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  1. Date: 6/27/2014 3:30:00 PM
    FAM... this joint reminds me of the Haiku... -----Those in glass houses shouldn't throw stones; or masturbate --------------during the daytime---------

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:58:00 AM
    I was trying to come up for air as I was reading this vivid account...excellent poetry.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:52:00 PM
    Amen brother...Thanks for your comment on my poem "Eye Shadow." It was a true encouragement for me. :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:25:00 PM
    WOW...I HAVE GOOSEBUMPS READING THIS. YOU ARE AMAZING!!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 11:40:00 PM
    Soupmail....hey fam you gotta give me some fresh INK! I'm fiending, hook a brother up...lol

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Hey, I am waiting for you to post some new poetry!! Sorry I am not getting around to many poems lately. I will have more time after tuesday! Have a good fourth of July! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 8:51:00 AM
    very faithful poem makes me wonder about all that sin you didnt name out right o well good stuff anyways take care

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:42:00 PM
    This is really great, Pace. and I see from comments below, it won in one of the contest. Big congrats. A well deserved win, I must say!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Great Writing Here ! And interesting Form...had never seen it till now> You did a marvelous piece with it.

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    Date: 6/18/2012 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dearly Frank!!
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:02:00 PM
    congrats on a fabulous win luv.. so awesome and super title too ...

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    Date: 6/17/2012 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Same to you Linda..thank you dearly!!!
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Pace. Love, Carol

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    Date: 6/17/2012 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol..hugs
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 11:39:00 PM
    Congrats Pace G...enjoyed your work.

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    Date: 6/17/2012 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jonas..loved your poem as well!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:43:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poem!!!

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    Date: 6/17/2012 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear poet!!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:22:00 PM
    Congrats, G Pace. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

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    Date: 6/17/2012 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dearly!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:01:00 PM
    Good title - intriguing. And a great poem to follow. Congratulations.

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    Date: 6/17/2012 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hugs..thank-you!!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:23:00 PM
    G PACE,, a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD

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    Date: 6/17/2012 9:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda always!!
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 7:28:00 AM
    The one true answer! Thanks for sharing this great peace so that others will now know how to find their way!

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    Date: 6/7/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joi for stopping by..always!!!
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:41:00 PM
    I liked the first half, then it went about the way I guessed it would. XD Though that's again just personal taste, writting wise, it's brilliant and well composed ^^

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    Date: 6/7/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Blake for sharing with me!!
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Ah, the first part reads like a strong prayer, and then everything is resolved by the answer at the end. Ya dun gud mahn, ya dun gud!

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    Date: 6/6/2012 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lovely surprise to see you Chris..Very well appreciate your presence and your comment..by any means you are always welcomed! Thanks
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:26:00 AM
    wow that is lovley, it is good to ekep stepping out in faith and we can run but we can not hide from God, i think eevry one stays in the boat sometimes, but God is ok when we fall because he picks us back up, a verry wellw ritten poem, where the spirit of the Lord is there is freedom I love that song we sing at church, God bless you love diane

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    Date: 6/5/2012 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Diane!! A pleasure indeed to have you sharing with me today!!!
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