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'Memories'



Across a noisy plane Where crowds gather You can hear their chatter and laughter I can still hear your heart beating Even though we are past that stage Of breathing because we have to The only thing I feel is you The only thing you feel is me It is more a case of it is the only feeling That keeps us going In anarchy and confusion This makes sense Feeling you Breathing you Even if it’s only through memories They sometimes talk the loudest
©300520121315

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  1. Date: 6/25/2012 2:36:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win with the warm and mesmerizing piece, Wilma! A sad couplet at the end...those memories feel as though we can reach out and touch them. I'm sure this write will touch the hearts and minds of many...nicely penned! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:06:00 AM

    Wilma congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 7:15:00 PM

    Congratulations, Wlima, onyour poem winning.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:58:00 PM

    Wilma, thank you for supporting my contest!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:34:00 PM

    I remember this beauty! Congrats on your awesome win, Wilma!! Great verse! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:14:00 PM

    YES, this one of yours I love got on the list. Congrats. Very well deserved win.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:32:00 PM

    I loved this passionate piece, Wilma, nice one..Congrats on your win..:) jag

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning place xx

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:00:00 AM

    This is so beautifully written Wilma! Such fragile honest emotion here and your final stanza is so true, it hurts.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win! ENCHANTING WRITE! I LOVE IT!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 8:40:00 AM

    Hi there Missy :D! This is definitely one of your wonderful gems that truly stayed with me! I distinctly remember this very vivid and wonderfully written poem and yet again, those last two lines of yours got to me :) Super congrats on your win in Chris' contest :D Mwahugs!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 7:56:00 AM

    awesome poem, Wilma. Enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris' "Be Yourself" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:04:00 AM

    I loved this piece, Wilma - the last line was especially clever. lfde

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Hi Wilma very lovely write, and thanks for your comments earlier, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 12:19:00 PM

    hope you had a wonderful day missy-- and sweet dreams to you later!! mwahugs!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Awesome! Fantastic ending lines! Great-great work, dear friend! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Oh my..did I mention jaw dropping?!? This is one incredible well written poem dear Wilma.I don`t wanna say anything more..just want to read it over and over.Sweetie,you are pounding my emotions here..Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:46:00 AM

    10 across the board with this amazing piece my CTH/muse. A true beauty. Luv n long hugs Michael the Ark Angel

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 4:50:00 AM

    wilma this a sweet, romatic and wonderful poem. And yes i could relate to this one. *smiles* Ron

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