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Rose Petals

Immersed in a body of rose petals I sway side to side 
The waters life embraces the petals like a raft in the sea
Petals rise and fall upon my skin like the ocean crashing to shore

Drawn and pulled, a water game of give and take - petals fall 
The scent of roses fills my breath, a cocktail of pinks, reds, and white; 
colour my eyes and all I see is artistry at work. 

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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Wonderfully descriptive and imaginative....Patrick

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 2:15:00 AM

    a language filled with tender, rosy melody.. love it, shaz.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 11:15:00 PM

    Were you the person I told earlier that I loved rose poems. this is so pretty. Yes, artistry at work. Soupmail!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:46:00 PM

    A DAY AT THE BEACH It sounds very relaxing and you present it with ease. However, in six lines you've hit all five senses -- artistry at work indeed!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 6:58:00 AM

    thanks Shaz, must have glitched, I love this and I just finished one about a rose, might post it tomo. ..David

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/31/2012 2:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey David...very glad that u loved my poem......
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:51:00 PM

    lovely Shaz!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/30/2012 4:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Lisa - glad u enjoyed :)
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:27:00 PM

    you paint your words on lovely canvas, shaz... delighted!..:) huggs!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/30/2012 4:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi nette.....thank you so much for your creative comment. Paint & canvas I very much enjoy lol
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 3:38:00 PM

    It is a pleasure to read your lovely poem today Shaz, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/30/2012 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Anne-Lise - thank you mwah
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Lovely written poem here Shaz!!! Beautiful imagery!!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/30/2012 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Pace....thanks. Glad u like the imagery - mwah
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Yes, your poem is a work of art, Shaz! You use vivid imagination to describe this amazing scene only seen by you! Thanks for your comment this morning! Have a blessed day. Peace and Love, Andrew.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/30/2012 4:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrew....glad u enjoyed the read :)
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 4:40:00 AM

    How very lovely Shaz

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/30/2012 4:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Josie mwah