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SOLDIER AND HIS WIFE

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SOLDIER AND HIS WIFE

Part I Trrrinngg......trrrinngg.... Telephone's ring, Heart pounding in her chest Young mother, in panicky haste Stirring sleepy children, jumps off her bed Praying fervently, in night's dead. Photo, his smiling face Her pulses race, Trrrinngg......trrrinngg.... Part II Gun-shots Alerting lost Senses of brave soldier, Dreams of children, doting father, Pines for lovely wife, on icy glacier. Shielded by the blessing showers Foe, he overpowers Silencing all Gun-shots. Yesha Shah 28/05/2012 SOUND OF EMOTION CONTEST Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Hurrah!!! Big congrats to you on this one, Yesha. A well deserved win.

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 10:59:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Wow, powerful write. Congratulations on your win. Tanya

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 10:16:00 AM
    very uplifting poetry. I love it. Welldone on ur glorious win. Wel deserved.

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:36:00 AM
    excellent ! Yesha You captured the essence of Nette's desires for this contest with your superb emotional write. Congratulations to you

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:33:00 PM
    wow Yesha, another wondrful win,, and a #1 at that , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:43:00 PM
    Great work that deserves the honor of first place..Enjoyed reading this afternoon ..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:25:00 PM
    Intense and so heart shattering...what sound can do! Amazing poem!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Congrats on your first place win, Yesha! This is an amazing write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:33:00 AM
    emotions expressed through sound are right on point, yesha... great use of onomatopoeia... well deserved win.. congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Yeaahh....yeaahh...Yesha!!Congrrrrrraaatts!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:47:00 AM
    Excellent and wonderful piece,Yesha....Congratulations on your super win...Kudos to you...

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:40:00 AM
    What a great win, Yesha! Nette knows great poetry! Keep up this great writing....this priceless.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:17:00 AM
    Yesha congrats on your 1st place win, excellent write..David

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:16:00 AM
    Man I knew this one was going to be way up there. I cried when fist reading this. Good job and congrats!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 1:43:00 PM
    Love how you told this from both points of view! the sounds are wonderful :)

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:37:00 PM
    I enjoyed your set of rictameters, Yesha, I am not sure she is allowing more than one of them in the contest. Hope you will double check that, and good luck to you!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:27:00 AM
    Perfect for the contest...but a brilliant read on it's own. It made you see and feel the situations, both.

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:24:00 AM
    great write Yesha

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 8:59:00 PM
    Wow- the ringing was a shrill chill that ran up my spine. I FELT this one... felt it bad- amazing job. You have all the content here, and then some, asked by Nette. It's hard enough to make a "sound" poem... but to FEEL the sound AND emotion... doesn't get better than this.

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