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Heaven's Doorway

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Heaven's Doorway

The most beautiful, the realm beyond imagination
the end of your mortality, the judging of your soul.
Today I stood in heaven's doorway to face God's verdict,
I've never imagined, I'm still young, too young.

I have so many dreams not yet fulfilled 
but there's a feeling, peace and comfort I can't resist
I see happiness without end, love without envy,
life without hatred, God eternity.

I look back, my family, friends and enemies I saw
I felt lonely and discontented without their forgiveness
suddenly I hear voices.."One more step and be with us".
Minutes and hours passed, I decided to take that step..

But..

then I woke..heard chattering, laughing, my siblings arrived,
So glorious, it's going to be fun...Oh If I take that step I will be dead by now!

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  1. Date: 5/28/2012 5:26:00 AM
    Well written poem .I think it is for the contest.Best wishes.

    bellen Avatar charmane bellen
    Date: 5/28/2012 5:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi good day to you Kash..yeah I entered it to the contest..Thanks for reading it!Godspeed!>>charmane.