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Doomed Death

Her blank expression soaked up anger at an eccentric pace, Tension built up as the devil inside of her deformed her face, Her scream sent chills shooting down my back, Instantly my ears blocked out the wale that made my skull crack, The darkness engulfed the everlasting echo as a whole, As if a hungry beast, I would never get released... Silence stretched and the night muted my desperate call, Again she screamed! Then followed the ear piercing car tyres screeching, with me screaming off my head, The lights of the cars beamed, The sudden rush of adrenaline reminded me that my life was hanging by a single thread, In a matter of seconds- we were in mid air, Driving off of a cliff, as we hit the curve, With no moments to spare, I learned over to conserve , The only being that meant more to me than me, That she... that she, who screamed at the truth of me, Only when she could clearly see the real me, I realised that she, Could not bear with the cruelty held within me, The cruelty within me is overruling, The more I accelerate the more I begin drooling, I drool as I can’t stop myself, I’m too weak, Within a strong person, comfort I seek, The confidence and reassurance in each of her movements, The glide in personality and unbeatable perseverance, Make guilt lay eggs in the centre of my brain, As it’s a fact that I don’t deserve her yet without her I’d turn insane... Lost in a world that’s falling apart, All that’s left is one last beat of my heart, Not because in seconds I’m doomed to die, That would just be another lie, But because in just a second, I know her life will end, And as her heart beats, Mine repeats...

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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 6:55:00 PM

    It's very impressive! It's rhythm fluctuates like a sinusoidal curve. I am impressed by the unexpectedness of words and meanings. Ena megalo bravo gia tin poiitria! :)

    Kyriacou Avatar Maria Kyriacou Date: 4/26/2013 5:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    euxaristo gia to comment, haha nice i'm guessing you enjoyed it, that's good to know :)
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:29:00 PM

    A very intense write with a lot of imagery. My favorite line. "Make guilt lay eggs in the centre of my brain" excellent work.

    Kyriacou Avatar Maria Kyriacou Date: 11/29/2012 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yh i guess it has enough imagery :P yh i like that part as well
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:22:00 PM

    lovely,glued to your lines,Marie

    Kyriacou Avatar Maria Kyriacou Date: 6/1/2012 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks xD
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:05:00 AM

    wow this is chalked full of imagery and suspense lovely pen!

    Kyriacou Avatar Maria Kyriacou Date: 5/30/2012 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you lisa :)
  1. Date: 5/28/2012 3:15:00 PM

    What a powerful poem. It shakes up the reader's imagination. I like it. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my poem the Lost Hope, Maria. -Mohammad

    Kyriacou Avatar Maria Kyriacou Date: 5/30/2012 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ooh mohammad thank you soo much for your comment... it inspires me to write more xD
  1. Date: 5/28/2012 7:41:00 AM

    Wooow....well done Maria. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Kyriacou Avatar Maria Kyriacou Date: 5/28/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thx anne lise xD