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The Life Expectancy depends on You

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The Life Expectancy depends on You






                                                    The life of a ship
                                                 depends on how you build it.
                                                          Strive for perfection.



Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

05-24-2012

                                                       "Only ONE life to live"

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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 6:44:00 AM
    A really good haiku with pearls of wisdom. Best wishes Linda x

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 1:48:00 AM
    Well said..Nice write!

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:57:00 PM
    Amen!! Great advice. We are all creations and creators...to some extent. I am captivated by your words Ink! Keep the pen moving Sweetheart!

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    Date: 8/7/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you always Doreen!!! :)
  1. Date: 7/5/2012 7:11:00 PM
    nice advice.

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    Date: 8/7/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks John!!
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 4:54:00 PM
    G Pace, i live striving for flawlessness & completeness ... I think my ship is steering the wrong direction... lol... Well, I'm blaming it on them engineers ... they forgot to build in the complet and flawless shift stick and the right perception break... Now to come and think of it..I don't even have an anchor on my ship... LOL.....THIS IS ME...pd

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    Date: 8/7/2012 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...too funny!! Love your comment!!
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 7:52:00 PM
    Hey! Great thot's with this haiku..Can u imagine if God told Noah to go build an ark and he had no direction at all...Perfection is found in the Holy Book! Happy Father's Day, G. From G! lol

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    Date: 6/16/2012 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so kindly!! Although, I'm not a father!! :)
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 8:17:00 PM
    You said it all! And so did everybody below. So all I can do is :o)

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    Date: 6/4/2012 8:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dan!! Always good to see you!!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:51:00 AM
    Nicely said poet

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    Date: 6/2/2012 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sean!!
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 12:52:00 PM
    The life of a ship, yes but ours always strive for perfection. Nice haiku, loved always, bl

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    Date: 5/30/2012 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always a pleasure for you to share your comments!!!
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 8:36:00 PM
    Strive for perfection or swim...P

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    Date: 5/28/2012 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..yes indeed Patrick..A pleasure seeing you!!!
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 5:15:00 PM
    now this is haiku!

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    Date: 5/28/2012 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much John..very powerful comment coming from you!!! Honored!!!
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    Date: 5/27/2012 5:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    good job too.
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 4:24:00 AM
    Hell of a works...all 3 was burners! Lol ur not behaving within form lines...

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    Date: 5/27/2012 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks fam!!
  1. Date: 5/26/2012 8:37:00 PM
    very nice haiku G...thanks for stopping by... blessings...Joseph

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 4:48:00 AM
    Oh yes.....this is so true in everything. I imagine these exact word in a marketing slogan for something that really matters! ..............Shaz x

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    Date: 5/25/2012 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so very much for sharing with me Shaz!!
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 7:26:00 PM
    G Pace, this life is all I need... a very extraordinary haiku..enjoyed stopping by tonight~ take care :-) PD

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    Date: 5/24/2012 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD always!! Hugs
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 3:40:00 PM
    "So dead on" Love it!

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    Date: 5/24/2012 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carma!!
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 12:49:00 PM
    excellent haiku here. And true that. Love the messege u send with such few words. RONNY

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    Date: 5/24/2012 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ronny!!
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 11:38:00 AM
    True - - - Well written. - oxox Anne-Lise

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    Date: 5/24/2012 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne!!
  1. Date: 5/24/2012 10:16:00 AM
    nice write

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    Date: 6/27/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes,,nice write...
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    Date: 5/24/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Nathan always!!