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My Plea

If I was a woman
Tied up in chains
Would I lie there and take it
Or would I fight till the end.

See I am a woman
I fall again and again
Not always but my hand
But I always avenge

But this… time.. I’m tired
My whole life, has been a fight
I keep rising from those.. ashes
They say I’m stronger in life,
But this time I’m tired
And I want to give in.
Cuz this time I’m tired……
Please God…..
Let me give in
Please God,..
let  me   give   in.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 2:55:00 AM

    Sad feeling. Beautiful lyrics for a song. A woman ultimately give in. It is mostly the nature. I prefer you when you are strong and avenge Love and hugs

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 3:53:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 1:18:00 PM

    I see the feeling in this. I can see it isn't dark just for the sake of being dark...it has pain in it. I like it...

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 6:07:00 PM

    Please do not give in. It will be better it time.

    Fontes Avatar Kirstie Fontes Date: 5/24/2012 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's what everyone keeps saying, but I've yet to see the better side. Trust me, read my other poetry. But thanks. And I truly mean that!! :'(
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 5:46:00 PM

    This was actually written as a song, thus why the symmetry is a bit off. Thanks for your encouragement. <3

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Yikes..it will get better..well written poem here Kirstie!!

    Fontes Avatar Kirstie Fontes Date: 5/24/2012 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. The only way I know how to write is trough true lifes experiences. My pain is written in words....
  1. Date: 5/23/2012 2:54:00 PM

    Well written, wish you all the best. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Fontes Avatar Kirstie Fontes Date: 5/24/2012 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You