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Under the Cedar

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Under the Cedar

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                                      Jasmines in the breeze
                                      wake crickets in unison
                                      surrounding the pond
                                      I'll wait under the Cedar
                                      Please, do not turn off the moon








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  1. Date: 12/27/2012 9:59:00 PM

    Couldnt find a new poem posted so im back to reading this beauty..It gets even better reading it for the second time .You re definitely mine favourite poet of all times...Have a happy new year dear Ruben..You and your loved ones too.Always in my nightly prayers.Beautiful poem.No shadows block d moon..even when swutched off it still shines with the sun s reflection.. a flicker blazing in the darkness.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Ruben, are you ok!? Should I call an ambulance!? Anyone who reads more than 2 of my poems in a row, might just need an ambulance haha! You ended-up reading some of my weakest poems posted on the soup....that one haiku is....is.....is....!!?? LOL! I am embarrassed -- people aren't meant to read them together in one shot like that! I don't want to call that many ambulances. Hey, you did great with this tanka, but you already know, especially with 40(90?) other people having already told you :D

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:35:00 AM

    Master, master, master ... a genuinely poetic closure that turns thought into art. Wonderful.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:50:00 AM

    Beautiful, Ruben! I especially love the last line...also thank you so much for the sweet note, it means a lot. Hugs to you, Ruben!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Ruben. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 5:37:00 PM

    Lovely!! You are on a roll, my friend...and well deserving the wins!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:58:00 PM

    oh my gosh, so this is the one that didn't win twice before it finally got number one with PD? She picked a really good top poem this time, Ruben. Not to be rude, but the other judges were kind of morons.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:44:00 PM

    Great Tanka. Love the last line.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 2:17:00 PM

    Fantastic tanka Ruben...Last line is gem! Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 2:17:00 PM

    congrats on your win Ruben

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Great tanka. Will fav it for sure.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 11:40:00 AM

    Ruben, congratulations on your first place win with this serene piece. Very good descriptor. You always seem to come through. Chas

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 10:28:00 AM

    Well deserved win, Ruben, congrats: ) Jag

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Wonderful... Congratulations on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:41:00 AM

    Congratulations Ruben xx

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:14:00 AM

    Awesome Tanka. Congratulations on the win!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:49:00 AM

    Ruben congrats on your win, just stunning...David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:42:00 AM

    Hello Ruben... wow.. another wonderful win..congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:12:00 PM

    oh my gosh, you are right. the midnight pearl. When will it be judged?? And the other one you mentioned. I bet there must be even others!!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Again Ruben, You make me feel like I could reach for a string like in a closet or on a basement light bulb or to some surreal switch--LOL I'd love to be there--So brief and peaceful, but that's what peaceful is---easy.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:16:00 PM

    So good, my man. Look at all the comments. I'm not jealous though. You deserve it. Thanks for all the support constantly. I've been reading, and writing more than commenting lately and need to spread it around more. It is nice to see someone knows what Tanka is here for.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:31:00 PM

    this is a wonderful poem Ruben. I really like it . Thnks for sharing it with us.

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 3:02:00 PM

    Perfection on paper! I smell, I hear, I see and I feel. Wonderful to read and enjoy.

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:02:00 AM

    I like this poem very much... Terry (& thanks for the kind comments)

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 5:29:00 AM

    I feel like echoing your last line Ruben :) this is a beauty! Hope you are having a brilliant week!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 5:39:00 PM

    yes, don't turn it off...the moon is so lovely :) good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 12:13:00 AM

    Jasmines in the breeze waking crickets.. beuatiful image... but i love the last line most... Do not turn off the moon... Splendid.. Very romantico.. nicely inspired!!

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 6:28:00 AM

    Such a beautiful write dear poet ! There's nothing like it my friend....Nothing ! Have a beautiful weekend Ruben....much love,james

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 4:02:00 PM

    looking at this again. Splendid!

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 11:43:00 AM

    mmmmmmmm I want to be there......:)

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