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Dream

                                                           Dream



                On your lips,
                after you fall a sleep, 
                two short poems,
                I'll write for you,
                on your lips,
                On your lips
                in front of your eyes,
                after falling a sleep,
                picture will burned,
                of one you love ,
                on your lips,
                in front of you're eyes,

                                   No one is aloud to wake you up,
                                   not  this very night,
                                   while you're dreaming  your loved one
                                   no one,
                                   no one, is aloud to dream about you,
                                   not this very night,
                                   no one,
                                   no one, is aloud to have desire about you
                                   not this very night
                                   no one,
                                   don't even try.

                In your dreams,
                after you fall a sleep,
                river will flow from far a way,
                in your dreams,
                in those nights that are just yours,
                after you fall a sleep
                you're gonna feel the  pain,
                in you're dreams,
                in you're dreams,

                                     No one is aloud to wake you up,
                                     not this very night,
                                     while you're dreaming your loved one
                                     no one,
                                     no one, is aloud to dream about you,
                                     not this very night,
                                     no one,
                                     no one, is aloud to have desire about you,
                                     not this very night,
                                     no one.
                                     don't even try it.



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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Very deep Ivy very stong I enjoyed reading it

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 10:59:00 AM
    great write Ivy,love the formation

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 6/26/2012 7:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Richard for your comment,Ivy
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 5:00:00 PM
    I thought I left a msg here already? But I guess not? I came back to read your wonderful words. :o) Waiting for more!

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 6/19/2012 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Dan, thank you coming back,and your comment,I am sorry I have been neglecting writing,but lately I was busy with life, I'll beck,thank you for your patient,love Ivy.
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 10:58:00 AM
    clever write, my friend - love the lay out too

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 6/19/2012 8:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you dear Jack for your comment,I appreciate it,Ivy
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 9:08:00 AM
    this does seem like a ballad. nice one. I suggest you word on your grammar though

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 6/4/2012 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear Brittany for stopping by and honest comment,I appreciate that,Ivy
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Wooow.....well written.....love it. - oxox Anne-Lise

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 6/4/2012 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear Annie Lisa,Ivy
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
    this is destined to be a song i believe, i took some time understanding the emotion but when i did , must say i loved it

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 6/4/2012 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx I appreciate your comment,Ivy
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 9:04:00 PM
    This seemed very weird to me. But I sure enjoyed it!!!

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 6/4/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dreams are weird,but we need them,right,thank you dear friend for your comment,Ivy
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:11:00 PM
    Yikes..had me on the edge of my seat here!!!

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 5/21/2012 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Pace, Ivy
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:00:00 PM
    Amazing!

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 5/21/2012 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Alex,Ivy