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Silent Night

Light goes out,
door closes,
the thick silence all that fills the void.
Thoughts besiege me now.
I look to the cot for escape.
But alas, I am betrayed.

War begins,
world burns,
each soldier brought down before they're time.
It proves not who's right.
The slaughter only proves who is left.
The one winner, turmoil.

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 5:44:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sam. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:00:00 PM

    Very well put together,,, the images,,, you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 3:14:00 PM

    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Sam. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 2:44:00 PM

    howaye