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Emptiness

I long for empty mailboxes and days that don't drag on no past memories of summer times long gone a little blood in my eyes to see my way back home A simple smile over coffee while sitting all alone I don't remember romance, yet how he did me wrong so many what ifs makes my life ever-so long I want to dance in bare feet and a white gauzy gown with a man who's love is true on streets made of cobblestone but until then listen to my heart's irregular beat call
Inspired by lyrics from Ray LaMontagne; New York is Killing Me Too much rhyme purposely done. I am doing some exercises and the rhyme will not be so forced right now it is. Will be for a while, learning some things for the time being.

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  1. Date: 5/21/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poetry today Danielle,hugs vie PS Love you new avatar picture, xxx

    Baxter Avatar Danielle Wise Baxter Date: 5/21/2012 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vie, I am so happy to see you! xoxoxox, Red