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Too The Top

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Too The Top

DO YOU LIKE BARE FEET ON GROUND
 BREATHING COUNTRY FRESH THE AIR
 UP ON THE HILLS
 NEAR THE HIGHLAND SKYS
 UP TO THE TOP
 ITS FRESHER YOU KNOW
 DANCING AROUND,
 
I WAS THINKING IN THE HIGHLADS
 NEAR THE SKY
 MAYBE IN DREAMS
 I FLOAT BY GROUNDING MYSELF AWAYS IS I
 RUNNING FREE THROUGH THE GLADES
 GROWING FREE SWAYING IN THE BREEZE
 BEES FLIT FLOWER TO FLOWER
 POLLEN DRIFTING I WITH A SNEEZE
 SEE A WORLD ALL AROUND
 SOME N PLACES A DARKER SIDE
 WAVER A SPIRIT OF LOVE ALL AROUND
 COMING TOGETHER
 ONE TRUE LOVE
 ITS MOTHER EARTH
 FROM A ATOM EVOLVES
 FROM THE EARTH
 NAKED FEET ON THE GROUND.
 WET DEW ALL AROUND
 SINKING NAKED FEET DROWN
 WITH A SKIP IN MY SPRING

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  1. Date: 5/21/2012 1:34:00 PM
    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Dawn. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:27:00 AM
    Dawn sounds like fun..David

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:16:00 AM
    Uplifting, brightened my day.

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 4:37:00 AM
    Nice poem