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Moonlit Pond


Silver light reflects
Bringing heaven down to earth
Captures your image
Your eyes twinkle in ripples
Into which I gladly dive

© 20/5/2012

for Rick's tanka contest

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:06:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:30:00 PM

    Congrats David! A beautiful image and pure romance. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:20:00 PM

    I loved this tanka David,its beautiful and its a winner for me,congrads !

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Congrats to you David, what a lovely image..Tanya

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:10:00 AM

    Congratulations to you on your win!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:21:00 PM

    Your beautiful tanka is so nice to see again on the winners list, David. Congrats to you. soupmail

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 5:32:00 PM

    Very nice David!!!!!!Enjoyed~Congrats to you!!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 2:55:00 PM

    Wow this is awesome...hope it ends up as a winner...good luck!!

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 2:34:00 AM

    I like this,,, very good ;} thank you for reading my "e - card poem " I truly did get an e-card from someone,,, you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 8:08:00 PM

    that is heart-melting, David! well done. this is another good one!! big hugs love ya, cap'n deb...:) best wishes for the contest!

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 9:37:00 PM

    WOW, I love yours. I sure hope I can come up with something as magnificent as this one.

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 12:49:00 PM

    Hi David great write yet again love to dropp by just to see whats coming next keep at it mate all the best Owen

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 11:25:00 AM

    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Gail. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:29:00 AM

    Oh so romantic David!! Me love it!! all the best for the contest, love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:26:00 AM

    awwwww! I love it.

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:23:00 AM

    Beautiful and romantic! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings and Love, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:10:00 AM

    So this is tanka? I think it's wonderful.

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 4:46:00 PM

    with the sound of silver tinkles, yes you know then you're alive, good stuff mate, cobber...

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 4:10:00 PM

    From you heavenly mind to my eyes, enjoyed your tanka David hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:40:00 PM

    lovely! good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are encouraging..Sara