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What The Sun Saw

It's bizarre, but I
Envy the Sun because
Today, it saw you.

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  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:30:00 AM

    Great Haiku ,Great write :) thanks for sharing Annie:) SK

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 4:11:00 PM

    such a strong title. Wonderful poetry. Ronny

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 1:47:00 PM

    you took the imagery to the top, annie... greeat stuff!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 4:26:00 PM

    Well done Annie, sweet - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 4:20:00 PM

    QUICK AND GOOD.

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 4:05:00 PM

    Concise and moving. Nice haiku.

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 4:01:00 PM

    Awww!!! So sweet! Perfect HAIKU phrasing... so grammatically correct. Your flow and enjambment are superb! Well done, Annie!!