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The Cold May Breeze

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The Cold May Breeze

Honey's nose is twitching 
as the breeze blows over her
coming through the open door,
ruffling her fur.

The sun is brightly shining
on this glorious day in May.
The breeze is still a tad too cold
but tolerated anyway.

The scents of springtime blossoms 
permeate the air.
I'll leave it open in spite of the chill
and a sweater I will wear.

The breeze comes off the ocean
making the leaves dance on the trees.
I'll enjoy it despite my allergies 
that usually make me sneeze.

Winter was long and frigid,
now gladly left in the past.
Honey and I are enjoying the day,
Spring is here at last !

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:43:00 AM

    :D I really like this. It's so sweet and light, like a feather of emotion. Thank you for sharing :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 12:04:00 AM

    Aye indeed... I'll second the notions of all!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 12:52:00 PM

    Can't get any better than this; a beautiful day shared with a girl's best friend! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 9:44:00 PM

    You're having cold breezes in May up in BC? The temperature reached 32c here in New Jersey over the weekend. This is a nice write.

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 5:12:00 PM

    A lady's best friend... her dog! (I presume.) This is delightful, Francine. Nicely rhymed with a pleasing cadence, and playful imagery, (except for your allergies!) Well done!! :)

    Roberts Avatar Francine Roberts Date: 5/28/2012 9:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    actually it's the cat
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 4:22:00 PM

    Enjoy spring,I enjoyed

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 11:43:00 AM

    oh this was just delightful, i felt the may spirit ooz right through. I just love may, so many wonderful thing happen. Thanx for this i love it.

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 9:33:00 PM

    yes, those spring days can sure make you sneeze, but it's darn well WORTH IT!!!

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:40:00 AM

    i like the rhyme and the flow of this poem. you've captured the welcome feeling that the first breath of spring brings very well. nice one! ~ thank you for selecting my poem in your "spring rain" contest - i appreciate it very much!

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:02:00 PM

    make that two, francine.. i have allergies as well... fascinating piece!... thanks for appreciating my soring rain poem for you; much delighted.) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 3:13:00 PM

    What a shame your allergies emerge just as the blossoms come to life, Francine. I know how much you love the warmer weather and I hope you can replace that sweater with a swimsuit soon. (Thanks for letting me know about the error in that poem. My mind is not too clear these days, but it was my mistake.) Love, Carolyn