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The spark somehow has disappeared Everything has lost its shine Like a lighthouse without a light To show direction Does it mean that it will not come back? Do we float around on clouds that Appear so fluffy That we pretend everything is fine? Drifting along on a boat that’s sinking With no NSRI in sight – Grab your life jacket see if you can swim to shore Nothing is as unreachable as the one that Doesn’t make an effort to be rescued.
*NRSI - National Sea Rescue Institute* *another weird one, I dabble in weirdness :-)* ©180520121530

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  1. Date: 6/4/2012 9:15:00 PM
    well, I sure did like this weird one then, Wilma!! Really cool poem. I love the last stanza . The last two lines make an awesome quote.

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 4:45:00 PM
    No, not weird at all! I love the message, Wilma. Very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 1:53:00 PM
    A lot of us struggle through life without making efforts to make changes. Without change, a tattered life cannot be restored. Your boat will never sink, dear, but I do sense some despair. Hope all is well, Wilma. This poem didn't seem "weird" to me at all. It has structure, imagery, meaning and an eloquent presentation. Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 10:33:00 AM
    My dear Wilma, your light can never dimmer or fade... your an Angel and part of the Soup and my soul through writing and friendship.. luv to CTH...

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 5:19:00 PM
    Always let your beautiful light shine here on P-Soup Wilma. Do not let anyone blow it out!!! Wish you all the best. - love from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 2:22:00 PM
    No I also find it a good one Wilma.." have enjoyed the read a lot Joe..)

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 9:26:00 AM
    Actually dear poet, I find this write of yours far from weird ! I find it thought provoking and quite the intellectual write ! I love the picture you painted here of reality ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 2:00:00 AM
    This has wonderful imagery and definitely got me thinking tonight. Nothing weird about it. The last lines really spoke to me. Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 3:10:00 PM
    i like this poem and all the imagery of rescue and the sea. very creative!

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:31:00 AM
    Hey Wilma, your words will always rescue me from a very dreary day here, it has not stopped raining for days, hope you are ok, and I don't think this is weird, I like it..David

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:08:00 AM
    this is a sad one Wilma, such doubt abound in this wonderful poem, love your imagery, we all love you here on soup, you are so special. harry

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 7:35:00 AM
    Who turned out the light,Wilma dear? lol,love the message throughtout your write:-) Hugs and Love,Arild