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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Nice!!!!!

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  1. Date: 5/26/2012 12:13:00 AM

    LOL!!I GOT MY HOODIE ON READIN THIS ONE! !!!! LOL :) Awsome!! fam....oops...let me fix my hood...you are totally stellar and raising the bar to poetry with purpose....love ya, Boo, deb

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  1. Date: 5/24/2012 5:32:00 AM

    Dig It!!

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 9:39:00 PM

    Nice update, it's not only digital update. Loved much and much and wish you best for the contest, loved always, bl

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  1. Date: 5/19/2012 7:00:00 AM

    You sound like someone who knows his stuff around computers. You youngsters grew up with them and get so much more out of them. Wish I had a bit more savvy! :) Great poem>

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    Lol....thanks Lizzie!
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 7:14:00 PM

    This is a West Coast digitalized 7.0 + 4.20 = 11.2 on the Ricter scale of an uplift mofo party plan.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 5/18/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yea sir....
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 7:11:00 PM

    Dr. Linton Bradley, I was a bit surprised that you left this blasphemer a comment. Now that I have left a comment, you might want to pour a wee bit of holy water onto your screen. If I fancy a hot-box with my peace pipe, I simple bathe in a bit of holy water to create the steam. During my spoken word stage, I wanted to write a poem similar to this one of yours. You didn't disappoint! Doc, you done good! Yeah, you done good! This is great to see, West Coast Parker Brother. West Coast 4 life!!

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    Lmao....throw it up!
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:12:00 PM

    :O Nice poem I like the xoxo part the best! XD Terrific lines once more! I'll rate u a 6!

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:12:00 PM

    :O Nice poem I like the xoxo part the best! XD Terrific lines once more! I'll rate u a 6!

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 12:30:00 PM

    This sure is a very creative write, Marlon and very spontaneous one at that that caught my attention :) -- as for your question about Fillet, you got it right! That entire poem pertains to something for me (haha secret!)-- as for the number, if you care to share, why's 1750 interesting? Curious me :D-- thanks for dropping by!

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:56:00 AM

    Hold on,I have to restart my thoughts and get back again,lol:-) Awesome write,Marlon!

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 11:30:00 PM

    Cool, good stuff

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 8:01:00 PM

    "Ohh, I loved it. Fun poem, Marlon! Love, Toquyen"

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 8:01:00 PM

    "Ohh, I loved it. Fun poem, Marlon! Love, Toquyen"

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 5:28:00 PM

    Very techno one!! It sounded pretty cool. Loved the "clock dat" at the end!

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 2:30:00 PM

    Scribe, yep, could be happening rigth now ...David

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    Lol....thanks, David.
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:46:00 PM

    A plethora of computer word play! I especially like"tap into your computer I & O's....very smooth!! :) Gwendolen

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    Thanks, G. Wen.
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Real hip JIVE! [Marlon..why is my writing scripture-like? do you mean it sounds like the King James Bible?? just wondering?] Light & Love

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    Thanks, Debbie.
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:03:00 PM

    lOL...A BURNER!! Love it!! very creative!!

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    Thanks, INK-U-SCRIPT...what it do..
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:19:00 PM

    You are one unique poet! I like the line "I have to stop cuz the screen froze" although I HATE when that happens!

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    Lol...thanks
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:13:00 PM

    Very well done Marlon, the professinal poet! - my eye see plenty....hugg`s & kisses Anne-Lise

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    Thanks, lady.
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Oh man, that was quite a ride ahahahah. it tickled me and made me think. Feel like hiking across snowy mountain tops

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 5/16/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks....hold on let me go with you.
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Oh man, that was quite a ride ahahahah. it tickled me and made me think. Feel like hiking across snowy mountain tops

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 11:31:00 AM

    Whenever I see a poem like this I think about how it will be read in a hundred years. And just as we lose a faint smile to "watermills" or "Plows" they will lose one to our technology. And that's why I think it is so important that we capture this moment just like you did with both the language, style and theme. :)

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    Thanks, I do appreciate you.