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My Baby

Beautiful,smooth,so refine,
I thank GOD, the day HE made you mine,
Educated and street smart,
My baby I love you, from the depth of my heart,
Whenever I see you in my dream,
I awake, feeling so refreshed and redeem.
Over the years we have grown so close,
We have jumped every hurdle, to reach the winning post,
Sometime I pinch myself to see if this is real,
Especially when I hug you, and you warmth I feel,
Our relationship, I don't want it to end,
You are my lover,my girl,my best friend...

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  1. Date: 7/28/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Good right poetry is always better when written from the heart. Nice bro and also thank you for the comment on my poem Forever Love.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/21/2012 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Terry
  1. Date: 6/26/2012 10:59:00 PM

    nice poem

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/27/2012 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Tarsha
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 9:22:00 PM

    Sweet write. Hang on to that lady.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/20/2012 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Vince
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 9:22:00 AM

    Well Said Richard! Great tribute to your relationship.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/11/2012 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Ann
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 12:24:00 AM

    this deserves a 7 ... you took the reader down one path (well me at least) assuming this was a child but eventually you revealed the lady of your adoration.. lovely write richard ty karen

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/1/2012 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Karen
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 7:25:00 AM

    " AWe THis Is SWeet! Carma"

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 5/27/2012 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Carma