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THE PACT: MURDERED BY SILENCE

This thought embedded deed in
my mind like a seed.
A secret pricking its poison
compelling me to scream.
A decision I contemplated noble
indeed.
But magnanimity isn't without its
penalties

My conscience nears dwarfism.
With every blow, as gilt swallows
me whole.
Cold from lies as i am a part of
this mechanism.
Promised that i may never walk
sole

My tears evaporate as I burn
inside.
And red eyes are all that I might
show for my anguish.
Redundant of who i am aside
I have evolved to a beast that i
can't distinguish.

Before long the thought shunts
me.
That i am but a subsidiary
A piece of a puzzle, in this frame
A trivial contract that I now 
burry

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  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Ronny. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 12:56:00 AM

    Big congrats on your win Ronny

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 7:03:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem!!!

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 7:02:00 PM

    Congrats, Ronny. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:41:00 PM

    RONNY, a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 6:09:00 AM

    The sin of omission kept as a silent secret often festers as we stew in our own guilt for it's keeping. Pretty heavy introspection here. Well told and well written. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:42:00 PM

    We all are a piece of the puzzle Ronny, such a neat way to put it. You have great descriptions in this and the message is complete! :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 11:11:00 PM

    a contract with some shadow of the soul so well written, ronny.. winning wishes and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 5:07:00 PM

    A very deep write here..wow, very powerful!!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:01:00 PM

    nicely done Ronny...thanks for your nice words on my poem...Joseph

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Interesting work..That is a small conscience one that is near dwarfism....Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Quite unique and interesting to read. It starts to zap you with contradictions. Excellent writing

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Quite unique and interesting to read. It starts to zap you with contradictions. Excellent writing

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 6:59:00 AM

    Powerful write.

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 5:56:00 AM

    Burner. I had to read it twice. Better than good Ronny.

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 4:23:00 AM

    'My tears evaporate as I burn inside' These lines are showing the potentials of your writing skills my friend. My good wishes are always with and thank you for your wonderful comments on my Epic poem. ...Ravindra...RONNY MADONSELA

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 2:30:00 AM

    Interesting poem here, I guess it is for the contest. Wish you all the best.