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50N sulfuric acid
If sprayed  on any fabric
Instantly turns it to rags
Just like some absences
Which sweep as a storm
N'tatter our souls
Bruise our hearts
Up to 
shreds.

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 9:51:00 AM

    our hearts like fragile spheres of glass, shaped by or lifes and the past. Like our heart we sometimes shatter taken from us all the things that matter. I love your poem very well written.

    leite Avatar viviane leite Date: 6/6/2012 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, that's so beautiful...thanks Lisa, for reading and writing such pretty lines. :)
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:32:00 PM

    I really enjoyed what this poem has to tell!

    leite Avatar viviane leite Date: 6/6/2012 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea.