Odor-cide

three fluff balls sweetly
yellow and small packs a smell
Like a hog farm!

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Debbie Duncan Date: 8/5/2012 9:20:00 PM I laughed on the last line,,,,,,, cute ;}
Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/16/2012 3:47:00 AM aweee.. Doris...
Joe Maverick Date: 6/19/2012 3:23:00 PM What could they be?? hmm.. I'd make my guess but I'm feeling chicken.." pleased to read your piece today Doris..!
Judy Ball Date: 6/18/2012 5:30:00 PM Hmmmm What is it that stinks? Guess anything can smell after awhile. Very thought provoking. God Bless, JB
elizabeth wesley Date: 6/16/2012 2:45:00 PM Ah Doris, so clever the way you make the art of smelling into poetry. I guess we can get used toanything if we have to. Are the fluff balls chicks?
Sara Kendrick Date: 6/9/2012 8:46:00 AM Geese poop is unpleasant?....Oh! someone said that if turned out free they deposit it all over the place ...Mom
robert johnson Date: 6/7/2012 5:00:00 PM Them little stinkers.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/5/2012 10:06:00 PM Funny one, Doris. Sometimes BIG things come in those small packages. big and scary.
Dan Kearley Date: 6/4/2012 1:41:00 AM Ya brought me a :o) as always...
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/31/2012 3:13:00 AM Doris were are you.....? Like your Odor-cide haiku poem, well done. - Sending you a :) and love from Anne-Lise
Ruben O. Date: 5/30/2012 8:27:00 PM Intriguing title, dear Doris! How are you? I hope everything is fine, my best wishes. Ruben.
kathryn collins Date: 5/25/2012 10:22:00 AM Yowser Doris. I think I can smell from it here. What are the fluff balls?
harry horsman Date: 5/18/2012 3:11:00 PM love this Doris, and i'm intigued about the title. harry
Dave Timperley Date: 5/17/2012 3:41:00 PM I never did hear of a sweet hog farm! There is one here just along the A6 and boy is that a high aroma! God Bless. Dave
Dave Timperley Date: 5/17/2012 3:40:00 PM I never did hear of a sweet hog farm! There is one here just along the A6 and boy is that a high aroma! God Bless. Dave
RONNY MADONSELA Date: 5/15/2012 1:48:00 PM i felt those words soothe the heart. Great write. Ronny
RONNY MADONSELA Date: 5/15/2012 1:48:00 PM i felt those words soothe the heart. Great write. Ronny

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Odor-cide

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