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Armageddon for Liars

Chalithra looks down upon Earth’s ills poverty, homelessness, starvation, war she sees Earthlings as half spirit and half beast sprawling her mighty wings, she draws her sword one stroke of her blade cuts the planet in two truthful souls on one part, liars on the next Chalithra’s long platinum hair shields her tears her human side wants liars to soar hopelessly through space but the angel in her knows that Judgment Day will come she raises her armored chest to the heavens then bows down upon her knees offering prayers for peace and harmony her petitions make their way to the Master’s ear she watches as Earth becomes whole once more and she knows how she will spend her days one-by-one she battles those who spread falsehood knowing only the Master can bring peace, prosperity but determined to save those who tell only truth
*Written for Tracie’s “Welcome to the World of Fantasy” contest Chalithra is half human and half angel and she fights for truth

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  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win,,,great story,,,Love Debra

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 9:03:00 PM

    CAROLYN, a wonderful congratulations in the "Welcome to the world of fantasy" contest~ :-) PD

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "World of Fantasy" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:53:00 AM

    Carolyn congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 12:17:00 AM

    Congrats on your awesome win Carolyn! I love the story and character development of Chalithra. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:47:00 PM

    A tale well told Carolyn! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 10:18:00 AM

    Carolyn!! this is such an awsome write!! Well Done!! Congratulations on your win!!! Brava!! love ya, deb

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 9:09:00 AM

    This is a wonderful way to describe Chalithra! Congratulations on your win Carolyn! :)

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 8:26:00 AM

    What a wonderful entry to Tracie's contest, Carolyn! You always bring a special reality to your poems. Big congratulations! She sounds possibly like a few people I've known in real life, unfortunately!! LOL!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Congratulations Carolyn proud to share a spot with you xx

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Congrats on your 1st place win Carolyn..I totally fell in love with this one as soon as I read it xx Hugs xx

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Wonderful poem... great message... Congrats... Terry

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Luck with the liars, Chalithra. History is full of them, nearly all come to bad ends. Great write, Carolyn. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

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    Sorry. Thought my laptop was malfunctioning. daver
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 2:19:00 PM

    Luck with the liars, Chalithra. History is full of them, nearly all come to bad ends. Great write, Carolyn. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 2:18:00 PM

    Luck with the liars, Chalithra. History is full of them, nearly all come to bad ends. Great write, Carolyn. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 2:18:00 PM

    Luck with the liars, Chalithra. History is full of them, nearly all come to bad ends. Great write, Carolyn. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:14:00 AM

    Oh, I love this write, Carolyn!:)) A fantasy spin with the most unique concept! I'd never heard that, "Chalithra is half human and half angel", but now I will want to know more. I love reading about the angels, have you ever read of The Nine Choirs of Angels"? I wonder in which choir Chalithra would be? A fascinating write, Carolyn, thanks so much for sharing! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:04:00 AM

    A tale that weaves it's magic with wonderful images and vivid word play. Just a great contest entry Carolyn, all the best to you. Luv, Lizabeth

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Chalitra,my heroine! Love the fact that she fights for truth:-) Have a great Monday,Carolyn.Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 2:10:00 AM

    Dammit girl. You really are a straight shooter. Marry me for ever. Screw those looking for something "more" fools. It's a bold write. GL my ol friend.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:51:00 AM

    love this Carolyn, good over evil always a winner, just like this for the contest. good luck. harry

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:17:00 PM

    boy, I have not seen many entries in this contest yet, but this sure looks like a top winner to ME. AWesome fantasy poem.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 9:24:00 PM

    This is really good...Haven't had an idea yet for this contest...Still thinking hard, and it's making my head hurt...LOL...Fixed my poem for your contest, soup mailed you, but didn't know if you read them every day...Linda

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 7:41:00 PM

    Geez, I thought this was going to be about Congress. Joking. good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 6:02:00 PM

    It has a bigger than life feel, weaved with detail.. nice work, Lady.

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 5:59:00 PM

    Love it Carolyn, folks don't view the mistake of forming their own logical concept from the nature of flesh as being a mistake that will be of necessity visited of Love. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 5:38:00 PM

    This poem is a gem Carolyn. Your talent radiates throughout this poem. Best wishes in the Tracie's contest luv. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Well Done Carolyn!! lol...best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya deb

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 4:51:00 PM

    Interesting story or fantasy that you have written for Tracie's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara