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Qui Est L'Amour

Mon raison d'être Your face is more beautiful than the Eiffel Tower at sunrise Our amour seemed real, n’est-ce pas? When I first saw you, I sensed déjà vu Your Mona Lisa smile made me wonder Is she a femme fatale? But when you kicked my shins, I knew that I had made a faux pas I’ll keep my distance from l'objet d'art

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:37:00 AM

    A belated congratulations Carolyn on your placement in Cyndi's "Un, Deux, Trois" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:32:00 AM

    Carolyn congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 2:57:00 PM

    I'll be sure to watch out for these gals with the Mona Lisa smile. Sacre bleu! My French is terrible. Hope you got the idea. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 2:57:00 PM

    I'll be sure to watch out for these gals with the Mona Lisa smile. Sacre bleu! My French is terrible. Hope you got the idea. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Carolyn - What a great surprise, your last stanza is incredible. thanks God for my high school French. Kathy

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:54:00 AM

    I just love how you entwined all these french connections in one poem.Tres jolie mademoiselle. Tu vas bien? Are you ok? Hope you are fine mon cher ami :) Je t'aime beaucoup :)

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 6:07:00 PM

    Beautiful write and quite cute Carolyn, as I see it. Smile, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Pleased to read this eyeful of a towering write Carolyn..) L O L hope you don't mind the humor?? All the best Joe..)

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 6:53:00 PM

    i understand some but not all. so glad i sent you that picture so long ago. yes that is the dog that i loved. so few people know what love is. love is the thing that makes you cry.

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 3:47:00 PM

    Lovely poem here you penned Carolyn, thanks for sharing. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Lovely to be reading you today. Beauty throughout. Love Michael

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 3:00:00 PM

    sounds like the smart thing to do! Enjoyed your poem, Carolyn. best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 3:00:00 PM

    This is really cute Carolyn, well done, nice to see you writing again luv vie