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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Scribe, I needed them tears. sometimes I hide them or push them away, I don't want others like Nathan, seeing me cry. not cuz I don't want him to know I'm still grieving, but because I don't want him to comfort what he or no one can touch. ..

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 10:53:00 AM
    sure i've read this before, but cannot find a comment from me... this is the world today, and you capture it in every words stanza and the whole poem,, brilliant Marlon....amazing poetry....

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 3:38:00 PM
    Oh yeah, I remember this provocative poem....starts with M, but it isn't Monopoly.

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 8:09:00 AM
    AMAZING! i love it zoo zoo much! =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 6:20:00 AM
    Brother, thank you so much for your poem. Excellent subject.

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:09:00 PM
    very nice ,,,, I must thank you for reading my poem about my friend that passed " Emma"

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 5:20:00 AM
    awesome :) this deserve a 7up!!!

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    Date: 6/1/2012 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks poet!
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Nicely done poet!!!!

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    Date: 5/31/2012 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks
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    Thanos
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 1:10:00 PM
    ahhh!! your awsomeness :-) great piece/peace ;-) When you go in print, I'm getting a copy and want it personalized!!! ;-) You know a sweet southern redneck girl is Gonna be packin'...bible, bricks, several knives, and a variety of other pea-shooters ;-)...hunt it, kill it,clean it, cook it...protect the fam...love ya bunches, deb

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    Date: 5/30/2012 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol.....thanks
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:20:00 PM
    That was creepy...just a bit, but nevertheless a very articulate, yet profound write! Keep up the "dang good" lines! :D =D DWB PS: I'll rate you a 7!

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    Date: 5/20/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    truly appreciated!
  1. Date: 5/17/2012 10:48:00 AM
    that was hot!

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    thanks
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Very nice Marlon! I like it ...Samia

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    thank you, Samia!
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:28:00 PM
    Very nice Marlon! I like it ...Samia

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Ow gee.. this is very profound,its sad that one have to carry a gun to feel safe in his own skin... Very strong words .. Charma

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    Date: 5/15/2012 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Makes me wonder what world do you live in. Crime is all over. Not scared, willing to harm if someone is willing to harm me. I don't do fear! Thanks
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Ow gee.. this is very profound,its sad that one have to carry a gun to feel safe in his own skin... Very strong words .. Charma

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Hi Marlon great write yet again very thought provoking, will be back again

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    thanks
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Strong and thoughtful write. I feel you on this one...well, use to (I don't run the streets with the bad boys anymore haha --which would be my brother lol) Nice write and thanks for all your comments

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    thanks, Jessica!
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Thought provoking piece Marlon, but - would not expect anything less from you.. Enjoyed this and truth be told crime is an everyday reality ;) thank you for your comments! ;) Wilma

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    Thanks, lol
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:27:00 AM
    Like they could be siamese-twin brothers. I am not saying it is anything beyond a blasphemous thought. Your poem simply sparked that train of thought for me. Nothing to worry about; I am not going to start sacrificing chickens or anything like that.

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    Date: 5/13/2012 12:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    as long as we fry them when u done, i'm not tripping..
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:25:00 AM
    Hmmm, live by the sword, die by the sword, but wot of modern-day warriors? Gets confusing for me sometimes, but if I want to protect loved ones against people carrying heaters, sometimes a ukulele and a hershey's kiss just isn't enough. Great flow and word-play in this one. I laughed at your Compton po-po comment....why would I want the 77th Division!? As for the blasphemous thoughts....something to do with God and the Devil; two faces on the very same coin. Not different coins. The same one.

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    Date: 5/13/2012 12:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dat's better than good i wanna c it...
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