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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Scribe, I needed them tears. sometimes I hide them or push them away, I don't want others like Nathan, seeing me cry. not cuz I don't want him to know I'm still grieving, but because I don't want him to comfort what he or no one can touch. ..

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 10:53:00 AM
    sure i've read this before, but cannot find a comment from me... this is the world today, and you capture it in every words stanza and the whole poem,, brilliant Marlon....amazing poetry....

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 3:38:00 PM
    Oh yeah, I remember this provocative poem....starts with M, but it isn't Monopoly.

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 8:09:00 AM
    AMAZING! i love it zoo zoo much! =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 6:20:00 AM
    Brother, thank you so much for your poem. Excellent subject.

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:09:00 PM
    very nice ,,,, I must thank you for reading my poem about my friend that passed " Emma"

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 5:20:00 AM
    awesome :) this deserve a 7up!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Nicely done poet!!!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 1:10:00 PM
    ahhh!! your awsomeness :-) great piece/peace ;-) When you go in print, I'm getting a copy and want it personalized!!! ;-) You know a sweet southern redneck girl is Gonna be packin', bricks, several knives, and a variety of other pea-shooters ;-)...hunt it, kill it,clean it, cook it...protect the ya bunches, deb

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:20:00 PM
    That was creepy...just a bit, but nevertheless a very articulate, yet profound write! Keep up the "dang good" lines! :D =D DWB PS: I'll rate you a 7!

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 10:48:00 AM
    that was hot!

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Very nice Marlon! I like it ...Samia

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 1:28:00 PM
    Very nice Marlon! I like it ...Samia

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Ow gee.. this is very profound,its sad that one have to carry a gun to feel safe in his own skin... Very strong words .. Charma

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Ow gee.. this is very profound,its sad that one have to carry a gun to feel safe in his own skin... Very strong words .. Charma

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Hi Marlon great write yet again very thought provoking, will be back again

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Strong and thoughtful write. I feel you on this one...well, use to (I don't run the streets with the bad boys anymore haha --which would be my brother lol) Nice write and thanks for all your comments

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Thought provoking piece Marlon, but - would not expect anything less from you.. Enjoyed this and truth be told crime is an everyday reality ;) thank you for your comments! ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:27:00 AM
    Like they could be siamese-twin brothers. I am not saying it is anything beyond a blasphemous thought. Your poem simply sparked that train of thought for me. Nothing to worry about; I am not going to start sacrificing chickens or anything like that.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:25:00 AM
    Hmmm, live by the sword, die by the sword, but wot of modern-day warriors? Gets confusing for me sometimes, but if I want to protect loved ones against people carrying heaters, sometimes a ukulele and a hershey's kiss just isn't enough. Great flow and word-play in this one. I laughed at your Compton po-po comment....why would I want the 77th Division!? As for the blasphemous thoughts....something to do with God and the Devil; two faces on the very same coin. Not different coins. The same one.