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RODENTIA





   
                                           You are a rodent
                                                      to a snake if you walk in
                                                              its territory.
  



Pace, G
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05-10-2012


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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Gi Pace wonderful absolutely right, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:49:00 PM

    Oh MAN!!!!!!!!!!!! WOWOWOW!!! Smh...what a poem...what a poet. Plain and simple. I enjoyed the MESSAGE not the reference to those creatures lol! Xoxoxoxo

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:45:00 PM

    I'M WAITING TO EXHALE........ PD

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 7:07:00 AM

    i hate reptiles man,eeeks,am out of this page Pace dear!

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 4:49:00 PM

    ekkk ekk,,,,I'm running...I hate them snakes... back to my TT.... always..PD

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 12:29:00 PM

    Oh gosh, your haiku is sublime.

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Your haiku's have SO much depth in their briefness! Looking forward to reading more <3

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/11/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for sharing with me!!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:04:00 PM

    This one is right..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..Sara

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No, thank you Sara!! Hugs
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 11:59:00 AM

    No doubt. My husband has a snake phobia, so any snake handling is left to me. Take care. Janet

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..I won't be handling any snakes anytime soon..you have them all.
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 11:17:00 AM

    Nicely done poet

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sean!! Glad to have you come by..as I indeed love your work.
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 11:22:00 PM

    Love the hummor! Carma

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you Carma!! Hugs
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 5:10:00 PM

    the more i read the more my mind expands.. love this site and the different genres and writes...this write feels very instinctual and enticing..tyvm karen...ex owner of a snake.. i kid you not lol and he kept trying to eat my leg :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/31/2012 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh no maam!! I will not own a snake now just for that reason!! lol
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:45:00 AM

    Another great Haiku... something to strive for... Terry

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/31/2012 1:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Terry!!! hugs
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 6:11:00 AM

    Sounds a bit like turf rules. Neat a Haiku that reads two ways and both quite true. Good job. Huggs TLee

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/22/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so kindly!!
  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:43:00 AM

    I wish I could write such succinct haiku. It works on many levels. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Nola Perez

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/21/2012 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All smiles..thank you!!
  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:47:00 AM

    no rodent chirping at the moon, a flash a blur comes tucker soon, ol brown snakes sweet delight... great poem mate...Don

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/20/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Don!!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:19:00 PM

    Pace your turning my head to Haiku... excellent>>>Patrick

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/18/2012 9:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you yet again..please visit more often!!
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:35:00 PM

    coming back to this one again. I sure like it alot.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/15/2012 10:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol...thank you!!!
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 5:08:00 PM

    free game. Thank you, Pace, for stopping by to read and comment on my poem. It's appreciated. hugs, Catie :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/15/2012 10:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Smiles...Thank you!!!
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma

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    Hugs!!
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma

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    smiles..thank you!!
  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:32:00 AM

    lovely

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    Thank you madam!!
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:05:00 PM

    Soup Mail!

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    Thank you so much..very helpful!!
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:05:00 PM

    Soup Mail!

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    Ok
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 9:32:00 PM

    So true...sad but true. We should try not to mark our own boundaries. Good one, Ink! Ruben.

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    Thank you sir!!
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 8:57:00 PM

    Wow, straight foward Haiku. Love it :)

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    Thank you madam!!
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 7:44:00 AM

    you pulled me in, pace.. smashing study of the element-of-surprise approach!... wink!...:) hugggs!

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    Thanks
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/13/2012 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!!
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/13/2012 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!! Hugs
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 5:46:00 AM

    It says so much xxx

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    Thank you for your kind comment!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 6:59:00 AM

    WOW my poet brother... I think I shall walk around and watch... Michael

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/12/2012 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..That was funny!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 6:42:00 AM

    SUBERB!! In fact,Excellent G P:-)

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    Thank you Arild!!
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