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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:53:00 AM

    a champagne toast to you,marlon... what a read, hic!..:) congrats with hugggs!

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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Drunken Pen" contest Marlon. Love, Carol

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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Congraccccchulaziuns oin yer 1st placederin victorrreeee! Youswuz sssshhhuurrrrrrr crunked owwt wun wrtin disssss won!

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 7:13:00 PM

    Congratulations onj yopur winn.

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    Thank you..
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 6:30:00 PM

    Beautiful write,Scribe....Congratulations on your superb win....

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    Thanks, I do appreciate it...
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 5:58:00 PM

    Goodness! Give this man a tums!! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & ;)ove

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 4:54:00 PM

    loved it the first time i read it...awsome job boo!!! big Congrats to your Pen!!! on the win :-) love ya, deb.. oh and you are officially in the stor... see part one ;-)

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:02:00 PM

    nicely done Marlon ..congrats on your win

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 2:07:00 PM

    Such fun to read....and clever beyond words!! Congratulations to you!!!!! #1 !!!

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    Thanks Carrie!
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Excellent The Scribe! You had fun with this and so did I. Congratulations on your win ...Samia

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 1:04:00 PM

    Scribe congrats on your win..David

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Elliot's Contest, Marlon! Great "Drunken pen"! Ruben,

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 12:11:00 PM

    Amazing drunkenpen,very funny to.Thank you for entering this amazing drunkenpen!!CONGRATULATIONS

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    It's been an honor babyboy!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 9:04:00 AM

    I love this new drunken pen contest,,,yours is so funny,,,i love it!!!

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  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:22:00 PM

    Great write! :)

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Haha! HEELARIOUS! :P - DWB

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  1. Date: 5/15/2012 7:10:00 PM

    Very cleverly written drunken pen. Good luck in the contest.

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 7:03:00 AM

    I like this alot. Nice job, and if the contest is still goin on, good luck in it!

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 6:07:00 PM

    Amazing right here..

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    Thabki
  1. Date: 5/12/2012 10:00:00 AM

    Luck in the contest. This sound drunk enough. daver

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  1. Date: 5/11/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Hahaha! ALCO-PEN-IZM -- now I know what's wrong with mine...lol! I like the "ink" wordplay very much. Thumbs up to Elliot too, this looks like a fun contest.

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    Love the form you gave it too! :)
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 12:32:00 PM

    This is one great write. Good luck. Have a nice day. Lucilla

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  1. Date: 5/10/2012 1:11:00 PM

    nice write Marlon.. good luck in the contest..

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 7:51:00 PM

    Good luck I think it's a winner

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 3:30:00 PM

    Funny, Marlon! I just don't know how to do this one because I don't drink!! But I am maybe going to try and use my imagination, which I have to use most of the time anyway! Good luck in the contest too.

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    I don't drink either....Thanks.
  1. Date: 5/9/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Scribe, a great entree for the contest, best of luck..David

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 12:17:00 PM

    while reading this racy, inebriated piece, i also saw a lot of philosophy in how the you related it to life... thoroughly enjoyable read; i am tipsy, marlon.. best winning huggs! :)

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 11:55:00 AM

    LOl! Marlon this is awesome creativity my friend, love the way you used letters numbers and signs swaying with your lines also. This was fun to read and effective, you made me feel drunk! lol! good luck in the contest!

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 10:08:00 AM

    Phenomenal! I'm convinced- Gooooluck in da condest

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Hi marlon. this one is so cute! I especially love the mention of ALCO_PEN_ISM! Love it! Hugs, Catie :)

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