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A Hushed Prayer

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A Hushed Prayer

I beg for your forbearance
For I have disregarded my faith towards You
I beg for your healing in advance
For I have disclaimed Your protection and now I’m blue

Do you notice that I’m blanketed in deep distress?
My pillow is soaked externally with unsettling tears
My good memories that bestowed hopefulness
Has been meddled with for years
Has been mistreated and replaced by insecure dreadfulness
I need shelter from the tide of despairs and fears

I’m shattered and I’m seeking Your helping hand
Receive my hushed prayer…from your throne in heaven
I’m begging for Your contentment that’s beyond grand
Receive my muffled prayer… or I’ll be stuck in this tarnished den

Do you notice that I’m spinning mad in the rivers of mystifying visions?
My unwavering boat sinks drastically with damaged gears
My bad memories that departed from my missions
Has been discarding the carefree years
Has been neglected and torn apart by dishonorable decisions
I need Your love to embrace me with jubilation and cheers
I beseech for Your mercy
For I have abused my steadfast hope towards You
I look forward to Your infinite Kingdom favorably
For I have admired Your blessings and now my dreams come true!
In Jesus’s name,

AMEN! 

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  1. Date: 4/22/2014 8:13:00 AM
    David This is so powerful and deep. The reader can feel every emotion you are writing and connect with it. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Black Hole poem.

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Excellent David. Always, Laura Ps: PULVIS-to dumby....

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 7:24:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning David William. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 7:44:00 PM
    His forgivness last forever and His mercy is everday renewed. Keep a positive attitude and look for the good not just around you but within you and build on it and you will find His joy and peace and confidence in you. God bless.